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Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil

0 posted 2000-04-16 12:40 PM


Tears Of Joy


I'm making this poem
Not only for you
But especially for everything
And all that you do

All the times I was confused
And didn't know what was true
I just looked for one person
And that person was you

You told me your secrets
You taught me how to be
But all you wanted to say
Is that you needed to be free

Now you're on your own
But you're never alone
Remember that you have friends
And they will never be gone

Every time you leave me
These tears of joy I cry
Cause I know that you'll be happy
Every time you say goodbye

You're miles away from me
And I think of you still
You're deep in my heart
You'll stay there  , you will


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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 2000-04-16 01:19 PM


To help one to spread their wings .....
Beautiful ..... I really like this warm and sincere piece, Lone Ranger

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-04-16 02:15 PM


Lone ranger, now this is a beautiful heartfelt piece.  Anyone would be lucky to have a friend just like you. Believe me, I know all too well how hard it is to let go of anyone that you care about, you express the bittersweet experience between friends perfectly and sincerely. I look forward to more poems by you.  And welcome to passions!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Lone Ranger
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
3 posted 2000-04-16 02:23 PM


Thank you Melissa and Peeper!
And Melissa actually this poem I made for my sister , but i guess it just fits for any kind of relationship!

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