Just the beginning, or the end?

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Open Poetry #6

Just the beginning, or the end?

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 2000-04-16 05:20 AM

Is it possible,
to love you at first?
To feel all the flutters
of the butterflies curse?

To see you, and crumble,
to melt in your sight?
To miss you so intenslely
and shutter at night?

You strutted right in,
and sat next to me.
You held me so tightly,
I couldn't quite see.

I lost all my boldness,
and quite contently,
I started to fumble
you started to flee.

I thought if I let you,
you'd come back to me.
It happened so quickly,
it just couldn't be.

I lost the contentment
of having you there.
I know that the moments
were special we shared.

I'm letting you go now,
but I'm hoping you'll see,
that the moments we've shared,
are locked deep within me.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2000-04-16 05:22 AM

nice flow tulips and the subject matter brought a smile yuhuyuhuyuhy thanky

All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

2 posted 2000-04-16 06:55 AM

Tulip, simply lovely and heart felt.

Thanks for sharing.

netswan

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 2000-04-16 03:59 PM

wayoutwalt,
I'm glad I was able to make you smile!
netswan,
Thanks for reading, I appreciate the response!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-04-16 05:13 PM

I was sitting with my favorite lady friend at lunch yesterday and I was thinking that I couldn't make her love me and she couldn't make me love her but I knew that it was happening to me and I wondered if it was happening to her. James

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-04-16 05:31 PM

Tulip~
This is such a pretty piece.
Sadly spoken ... but lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

6 posted 2000-04-17 08:49 PM

jm,
Ohhh, the feelings that fly in the beginning of a relationship!!! Wouldn't it be wonderful if those feelings could stay alive the rest of our lives?
Marge,
Thank you!

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