Open Poetry #6 |
Sing me your song. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sing me your song, gentle voice Let your melismatic cascade of notes Fill my ears with the song of your love A song long unsung, just newly discovered Sung in a new voice, for you, for me Sing me your song, gentle spirit Let each phrase tell of a love of life Fill my mind with the memory of your love Of memories just found, and yet to be found Told in a new way, for us Sing me your song, tender heart Let your harmonies caress the recesses of my soul Fill my life with the promise of love to come Of a love that will transcend the page And become a masterpiece of art, and of love ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sven, How do you keep coming up with such beautiful pieces? I am truly in awe of your romanticism. Jeffrey |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
He comes up with beautiful romantic poems because he's a beautifully romantic person!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Nice poem. Beautiful words. Whoever "she" is, seems to be singing to you an awfult lot of new love lately. Very interesting choice of words throughout. Looks like you have just recently made new memories with the mystery woman... Great poem. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Nice poem. Beautiful words. Whoever "she" is, seems to be singing to you an awfult lot of new love lately. Very interesting choice of words throughout. Looks like you have just recently made new memories with the mystery woman... Great poem. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Painter,poet,born romantic,owner of a white horse and knights outfit,......need I go on. Another display of one of your endless talents my friend! Beautiful. Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ So lovely. Got my little heart going pitty-pat ! You are a master at the romance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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