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Sven
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0 posted 2000-04-16 11:52 PM


Sing me your song, gentle voice
Let your melismatic cascade of notes
Fill my ears with the song of your love
A song long unsung, just newly discovered
Sung in a new voice, for you, for me

Sing me your song, gentle spirit
Let each phrase tell of a love of life
Fill my mind with the memory of your love
Of memories just found, and yet to be found
Told in a new way, for us

Sing me your song, tender heart
Let your harmonies caress the recesses of my soul
Fill my life with the promise of love to come
Of a love that will transcend the page
And become a masterpiece of art, and of love

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-16 11:56 PM


Sven,
How do you keep coming up with such beautiful
pieces? I am truly in awe of your romanticism.

Jeffrey

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2 posted 2000-04-17 12:04 PM


He comes up with beautiful romantic poems because he's a beautifully romantic person!!!  
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2000-04-17 07:57 PM


Sven,
Nice poem.  Beautiful words.  Whoever "she" is, seems to be singing to you an awfult lot of new love lately.  Very interesting choice of words throughout.  Looks like you have just recently made new memories with the mystery woman...
Great poem.


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2000-04-17 07:58 PM


Sven,
Nice poem.  Beautiful words.  Whoever "she" is, seems to be singing to you an awfult lot of new love lately.  Very interesting choice of words throughout.  Looks like you have just recently made new memories with the mystery woman...
Great poem.


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Marina
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5 posted 2000-04-17 08:04 PM


Painter,poet,born romantic,owner of a white horse and knights outfit,......need I go on.
Another display of one of your endless talents my friend!  Beautiful.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 04-17-2000).]

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-04-17 08:05 PM


Sven~
So lovely.
Got my little heart going pitty-pat !
You are a master at the romance.
~*Marge*~


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