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Desires Unyielding
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Desires Unyielding |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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Desires Unyielding ~First Knight~ As you stood facing the wall, where the milky white of your skin blended so well. I pressing ever so close to keep you pinned. A soft sigh deep in your ear. Long strands of your hair draped down your back. Pressure building as I pull at your waist pulling you ever so close to my own. Shallow of breath, a skip in the beat. Passion without words, bodies in heat. A soft caress upon the neck, a gentle nip on the shoulder. None surpass your beauty, and no other I can see. A hand that turns your head, with a tugging of your hair. A warm and solid kiss, as the room begins it's spin. There is no place I would rather be than here within your grasp. So hold me here my darling, While I learn to catch my breath. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yep...shew..sure is hot and romantic in here!!!  by the way I liked your signature statement!"Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oman oman oman very nice All Day I Dream About Stanzas!! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Whew First_Knight it is hot in here! Gorgeous poem. Thanks for sharing. I am growing my hair long now --) netswan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
First Knight you really did a good job with this one..so sensual and warm...is this a true story? ha...ha...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ How pleased I am to see you. This is simply stunning. You made it soar off the page. Beautiful, sir. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow.....this is HOT!!! Excellent writing!!! What more can I say?? Oh yes!!! Keep it coming!!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery, Sir!!  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh thank you all so much for the kind replies A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Goodness! I felt that! Kathleen |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I am glad you did Irish A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whew...I think the temperature went up about 20 degrees in here. OH MAN!!! What a poem |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Hehe....your always hot Ruth dear.... A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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