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Unspeakable Pain
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Unspeakable Pain |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Inside Why? Do I keep on suffering like that I've given up the fight But my heart just can't forget I felt the laughter The joy and the pain But after all that I have done I think it was in vain My friends try to judge me Try to tell me what to do I should've listened to my heart Instead of listening to you It's not like I can explain What is in my soul But with this wound inside my heart Where can I go? I feel like I'm lost A soul in the crowd I am filled with words I just can't speak aloud The truth is I don't know what to do I'm looking for a savior But no one seems to be true God please help me! Please show me the way I am lost in a maze of thoughts But I have nothing left to say [This message has been edited by Lone Ranger (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions Very impressive first post. Nice flow to this piece. Jeffrey |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Lone Ranger! Welcome to Passions. I am fairly new myself. This is a delightful poem that flows wonderfully. Thanks for sharing. netswan |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Great poem. Welcome, I am looking forward to reading more of your pieces  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to Passions--this is a great place to speak those silent words...looking forward to more...Nice work, here. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sad to hear your heart in so much pain hope all gets better with time!I will pray for you and ask for healing of your heart  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay, sorry about that Ranger some of the guys around here arn't as "ROMANTIC HEARTS" as they appear. Not to worry though you'll have plenty of times to catch 'um. There's a lot of them that like to crawl out of the woodwork in the wee hours of the morning while your sleeping thinking they won't get theirs. Just remember their "Handles" then tomorrow you can hit them with... Breaker breaker 911 Romantic Heart on the loose. (Romantic Heart, thanks for the Edit - Lucky) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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Frank Bucciero New Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 5 |
i thought it was very deep! nice work ranger |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is a very haunting and poignant poem. Deeply moving, and very well written. I am so sorry about your sorrow. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Thank You All!! You have no idea how good it is to see that my poems actually touch people's heart!! I'll keep the good work , and honestly I hope that my pain doesn't lasts forever , even though it made me write this great poem... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions, Lone Ranger. Nice entrance with this poem. Great work!! Well said....good flow and expression. Looking forward to more... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
I just edited this poem , improved it a little bit.. Hope you guys like it! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family....I enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome....  |
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