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The Pain I Hide
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The Pain I Hide |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
hiya now its time for me to say bye-ya [This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I can certainly relate to your pain. There are no easy answers in love or heartbreak. Yet over time all wounds heal ,. maybe not completely but it does get easier.Keep your head up. Jeffrey |
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snuffy Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 19 |
sounds really sad  U really did wear your emotions on your sleeve in your poem. Love is beautiful, yet so painful.... Your poem transmits your emotions very honestly and clear...... Great poem!  Snuffy |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Lady Web! Heartfelt poem. And, yes time eases these pains -- Sometimes, we think they will never heal, but they do. Don't waste your life on unrequited love. Keep writing. Poetry is such a great way to pour out our thoughts and slowly dull the pain --- Write some fun ones and make it a challenge --) Kind of like writing Christmas stuff in the middle of a very hot summer --) Teresa King |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
This piece was written some time ago. Still testing the waters, But definitly like it here. Thanks for the input, and yes I do intend to dabble in other subjects. as I continue to write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyWeb~ Glad to read in your reply that you're now treading calmer waters. This was a heart-felt poem. Enjoyed the read. Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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