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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Archangel On Moments of us I sink and relinquish to songs sung by the tuneful Voice of you slowly falling I surrender to you the archangel of my heart words whispered I send thoughts with waves of emotions survived through deep oceans of my soul to touch the tranquil essence of you Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: Beautiful as ever reaching for the soul..  HUSG |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Dark Angel, I enjoyed this. It was quite moving. You expressed your emotions quite well. david2 |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Dark Angel, I enjoyed this. It was quite moving. You expressed your emotions quite well. david2 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
These are your forte!! Wonderful Angel! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Reading this was like floating on a feather...so soft and sweet! Very good!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
DA, Excellent writing!!! This is so warm and sweet. It that spring in the air??? LOL. I loved this!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Cassanova Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 39Turlock, Ca. |
!!! Wow! This reaches out and grabs one, now doesn't it! Beautiful verse, there doesn't seem to be much free verse around here, but this is aweseome! Jason |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA, I always like the way the words just seem to "fall" (quite literally!) from your pen. . . this is very good!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Cindy, Thanks hon *hugs*--------------- David2 thank you so much --------------- Thanks Angel glad you like --------------- Sharon thank you hon --------------- Lone Wolf, thank you for your lovely reply --------------- Wow, thanks Jason glad you enjoyed it. --------------- Thank you Denise --------------- What a lovely thing to say Sven, thanks What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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