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Hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich
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Hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich Two hot chocolates and a tuna sandwich. Set there between two people bewitched. They ogled and stared at each others eyes, And whispered across invisible vies. Each and their outgo walked on a rainbow. A scenario structured of shadow. They could not believe or savor the true, This meetings impromptu out of the blue. Hands crept across the table in reach. Souls stretching out in lovers beseech. Illusions barrier still held the stream, Of the real and the end of each dream. Their fingers did touch to nova the night. And feelings did flare the brightest of bright. The sound was a sigh like a babies new cry. And that was the hold, of impossible lie. Their rainbow dissolved into distant adore, As each sank back into dreams once more. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I never knew that a tuna sandwich could be so romantic, but I guess anything's possible. But I do know I enjoy all your poems Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, I really love the idea of this--it is romantically beauiful...and distant adore I understand. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very romantic, Sy! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Though I loved your poem, I have to say, I don't like tuna..could it be a grilled cheese instead?  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
hahahah, this was clever and delightfully funny ---- I never knew that"sorry charlie" had it so good. Teresa King |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Their rainbow dissolved into distant adore..." I like it.... and I like Hot Chocolate too...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Oh yes tuna can be romantic. Glad you liked the poem. Love Sy Martie, Thank you so much for the understand. *L* Denise, Thank you dear. *L* Poet deVine, Sorry this one is strictly tuna. *L* netswan, Glad you enjoyed the sandwich. Nan, Thank you and me too on the hot chocolate. *L* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ooh hot chocolate! YUM! Tuna I could eat, but don't care for it much anymore. Romantic with or without the tuna on this one  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhtDove, Thank you for the nice comment, I thought everyone liked tuna? *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Their fingers did touch to nova the night. And feelings did flare the brightest of bright. The sound was a sigh like a babies new cry. And that was the hold, of impossible lie. Their rainbow dissolved into distant adore, As each sank back into dreams once more. -------------- SY I ADORE this poem!! this is perfect... what a perfect moment in time you have drawn for us here. this goes on my fav by you list  take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sy: I've tried many different combinations in my time but tuna stuffed with chocolate is a new one..LOL but if it has that effect, I'm game.. HUGS ps: Actually...if you added some mushrooms stuffed with stilton, some crisp lettuce and some toast lightly fried in garlic and fresh cream served with a little dill...it's growing on me...oh my! [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 04-16-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely .... and yes, very romantic .. And I love tuna, Sy ..... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, You are so sweet, what a wonderful comment. *L* Rainbow, I think I would really have dreams after that tuna sandwich. *L* Pepper, Thank you sweet, you are a joy. *L* |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, sigh - isn't it a shame when you open your eyes and discover you've been dreaming - with those loving eyes still in your brain, and tuna sandwich haunting your taste buds! Oh, man! And of course, if you were awake, it's even worse at the end. Yes, romantic and sweet. Good title, too! |
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