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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 2000-04-02 03:34 PM



Springtime is realy my favorite season
because it's work on earth is quite pleasing.
You can tell that springtime is here
by the flowers scent in the air.

The essence of spring is resounding
as the pollen count is mounting.
The birds are chirping with happiness
as the skies shine with a peaceful bliss.

The grass and trees grow greener in the spring
and the flowers some alive to sing.
The temperatures rise a bit higher
as the sun shines a bit brighter.

All of the bodies of water become clearer
as they sparkle like sunshine in a mirror.
The earth morphs into a beautiful garden
everytime spring decides to beg it's pardon.


 Nathan

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-02 03:38 PM


Welcome back, Nate! I missed you, buddy! This is absolutely beautiful!! You have captured the very essence of Spring in your words! This is my favorite of yours to date!! So beautiful!! I especially love the last line!!  

Denise

Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2000-04-02 04:06 PM


Thank you Denise, I've been very busy lately and I haven't had the chane to post. I 'm glad that you liked my piece and I'm glad to see someone really missing my presence on this board.

 Nathan

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-04-02 05:18 PM


Very expressive Nate..a fresh touch of spring.  James
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-04-02 06:57 PM


Refreshing poem of spring, exactly the topic of my next post. We're all thinking in the same direction. This is very lovely, Nate.
Liz

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5 posted 2000-04-02 07:01 PM


I like it a lot!!!!!
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6 posted 2000-04-02 08:54 PM


Nate~
You've been sorely missed.
Glad you've dropped in.
Love to see your smiling face.

This is the prettiest piece I've
seen you do .... talks to my heart.

'The earth morphs into a beautiful garden
everytime spring decides to beg it's pardon'
That line is just awesome.
Bouquets for such a lovely piece.


What a refreshing look at Spring you've
given this lady.  Thank you.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CherylLynnMckee
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7 posted 2000-04-02 09:01 PM


Lovely poem.. a feast for the eyes! Wonderful.

 

Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2000-04-07 04:07 PM


Ohh, you all have bought joy to my eyes!!
Marge, you are such a doll!! God bless you!!
Thank you James, Liz, Vandanna, and Cheryl for your nice comments.

 Nathan

Martie
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9 posted 2000-04-07 06:30 PM


What a lovely poem to spring.
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 2000-04-16 03:52 PM


Thank you Martie for you nice comments.


 Nathan

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