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Springtime |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Springtime is realy my favorite season because it's work on earth is quite pleasing. You can tell that springtime is here by the flowers scent in the air. The essence of spring is resounding as the pollen count is mounting. The birds are chirping with happiness as the skies shine with a peaceful bliss. The grass and trees grow greener in the spring and the flowers some alive to sing. The temperatures rise a bit higher as the sun shines a bit brighter. All of the bodies of water become clearer as they sparkle like sunshine in a mirror. The earth morphs into a beautiful garden everytime spring decides to beg it's pardon. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome back, Nate! I missed you, buddy! This is absolutely beautiful!! You have captured the very essence of Spring in your words! This is my favorite of yours to date!! So beautiful!! I especially love the last line!!  Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Denise, I've been very busy lately and I haven't had the chane to post. I 'm glad that you liked my piece and I'm glad to see someone really missing my presence on this board. Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very expressive Nate..a fresh touch of spring. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Refreshing poem of spring, exactly the topic of my next post. We're all thinking in the same direction. This is very lovely, Nate. Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like it a lot!!!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ You've been sorely missed. Glad you've dropped in. Love to see your smiling face. This is the prettiest piece I've seen you do .... talks to my heart. 'The earth morphs into a beautiful garden everytime spring decides to beg it's pardon' That line is just awesome. Bouquets for such a lovely piece.  What a refreshing look at Spring you've given this lady. Thank you. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely poem.. a feast for the eyes! Wonderful. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ohh, you all have bought joy to my eyes!! Marge, you are such a doll!! God bless you!! Thank you James, Liz, Vandanna, and Cheryl for your nice comments. Nathan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely poem to spring. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Thank you Martie for you nice comments. Nathan |
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