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SorrowsMystress
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I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up.

0 posted 2000-04-14 01:30 PM


I have come to see you
I have one great plea
You see, my heart is broken
I think it needs surgury
It's been trampled on so much
Chewed up, spit out, shattered
And now I feel lonely
And nothing really matters
Take a look at it please
And tell me if there's a cure
You see, my heart has been through a lot
Too much for it to endure
Doctor, please, I'm begging
You handle it with care
Don't drop it, don't lose it
It's broken but still there
You're my only hope
I'm afraid there's not much time
So please give my heart a chance
It was knocked down in it's prime
Oh doctor, I need your help
love's been so unkind to me
And my heart cannot bear anymore
I need it, though, you see
I trust you'll do the right thing
Just be careful, it's fragile
It simply can't take anymore
It's bitter, cold and agile
Thank you doctor for your help
You have done wonders to make it heal
Now I can believe again
That love is actually real

*** And who is the doctor, you ask? Why, it's my boyfriend John........good job Doc...you've made my heart whole once again! I wuv you! hehe
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 "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath





[This message has been edited by SorrowsMystress (edited 04-14-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-14 01:57 PM


This is cute!

Denise

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-04-14 02:49 PM


Liked this..I always believe that just as sure as we will fall hard when someone hurts us another will come and offer us a loving and caring hand to help soothe and heal our hurt heart.  James
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