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allimac12
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0 posted 2000-04-13 07:09 PM



Art


Mischievious lines,
Darting,
Zigging and zagging in the
Endless pursuit to
Join one another.
To form shapes and
Build from each other,
Magically creating
Curves and turns and
Figures and faces.
A hidden beat drives to the
Completion of a
Simple masterpiece.
Strange to the common eys,
Ridiculous to some,
Yet brilliant to others.
The meaning is everything.
The meaning is nothing.
Is all the world
Combined
To form
One
Sole
Piece of art
Hanging lonely in a
Vacant gallery?

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-04-13 09:34 PM


This has a hard edged feeling to it... and if you had to describe the way I draw, the empty canvas would do..
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2000-04-13 09:36 PM


I see the canvas behind the words.

 Kathleen


netswan
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3 posted 2000-04-13 09:37 PM


Art, how beautiful.  But, yet I agree with
poet divine -- I can't draw a lick, so
I draw with words ---

Great poem - and so descriptive.



 Teresa King
www.tipsfortop.com

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4 posted 2000-04-13 10:24 PM


allimac.....We are all God's masterpiece
I'm not sure if this was the message behind this piece, but that is what I took from it

Thank you

Jeffrey

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