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Will You Tell Me?
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Will You Tell Me? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
If things are different In the next three months And you change your mind Will you tell me? If those old feelings Come back again And love begins to sprout Will you tell me? If we are able to talk Without arguing all the time And can speak rationally Will you tell me? If you begin to see That I have changed And you like who I am Will you tell me? If you see that I still love you For who you really are inside And accept you wholly and completely Will you tell me? If time apart is all you needed To collect your thoughts And you decide you want to come home Will you tell me? ----------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Very well done. I can totally understand. It is like you took the thoughts right from my mind. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Simply said, but spoken from the heart...I wish you luck, I hope whomever this is for does tell you |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lone Wolf~ Hugs to you... this is so sweet. Loved the way it made me feel.  -SEA |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Lone Wolf - this poem really touched me. I hope it speaks to your beloved's heart as it has to mine!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Effigy, Thank you, it is always nice to touch another. Sorry that you can relate so well. Hope things go better for you. Beki, Thanks....need all the luck I can get right now. I hope so too. SEA, Glad you liked it. Thanks for the hugs, needed that today!!! Troy, Hi and glad it spoke to your heart. Hope it speaks to his too, but you never know. So nice to touch someone with my writing. Thank you!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such sincere writing...best wishes to you... ~ Claire |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
this is a wonderful poem written from the heart. i really liked it alot. the style also reminded me of a style that i like to use myself...that also scored this piece some major brownie points! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LW, great poem. . . from the heart. . .I am sure that he (or she?) will tell you. . . I don't think that they could hide it. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi lonewolf! It's a lovely one straight from the heart. I'm sure the person loves you very much. Good luc in your love. When you're together write to me. *Hugs* A_L --------------------------------------- "Love is not love which alters when alteration finds" ---------------------------------------- |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi lonewolf! Good luc and see more from u!! [This message has been edited by amazon_lover (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi lonewolf! Good luc and see more from u!! [This message has been edited by amazon_lover (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, nice poem. Hope that "someone" tells you what you want to hear. Sounds like a heartfelt plea in this poem. Nice writing as usual. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, Thank you!!! Weaubleau, thanks and glad you liked it. Didn't even know I could get brownie points here!!! LOL. Sven, Yes, it is from the heart. I know they Couldn't hide it even if they wanted to. Thanks. A_L, Thank you and not so sure I am loved. I will let you know!! Danny, Not sure it will be what I want to hear, but I just want the truth. It was heartfelt....just my thoughts at the time. Kind of wondering aloud on paper if that makes sense? Hope so. Thank you!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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