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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2000-04-13 10:36 AM


I too am in the wind,
And it's not a pleasure yassee,
Cuz the wind belonged to Balladeer,
It turns my complexion green.

It couldda been the Mexican food,
He devoured late last night,
It couldda been the beans and beer,
But it's taking away my sight.

If the breeze would change directions,
Or if he'd at least gain some control,
My life would be much better,
I wouldn't have to hold my nose!

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-13 10:39 AM


ROFLMAO.....Hey Toe? Need a clothes pin?...LOL

Jeffrey

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2 posted 2000-04-13 10:40 AM


Poor baby... get away from that bug man... I smell MUCH better! LOL. Great poem, green one! SMOOCH!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 04-13-2000).]

WhiteNite
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3 posted 2000-04-13 10:46 AM




Laughter is the best medacine for a lonely heart.  Thanks man

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)



Mistikman
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4 posted 2000-04-13 10:50 AM


ROFL  
SEA
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5 posted 2000-04-13 01:45 PM


Toe~ put my Dad in there instead of Balladeer! Good grief! I laughed hard at this! This is soooo my Daddy! -SEA
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-04-13 01:52 PM


Toe,
That's what you get for standing down wind.
LOL enjoyed.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-04-13 02:00 PM


TOE -

Didna your daddy teech you much -
standin' close 'nuff to 'Deer to touch?
or could it be he had 'nuff wind
to blow you 'round the world agin?

But as for a'turnin' green, c'mon -
that's just the meddications y'all r on.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Denise
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8 posted 2000-04-13 02:49 PM


ROFL @ the poem and the replies!!  

Denise

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9 posted 2000-04-13 10:50 PM


ROFL!!! Toe you shouldn't stand down wind buddy  
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