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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
so hot. voices coming from every angle , none of them means a thing . questions , answers , exclaimations ? . things enter and exit my head in an orderly fashion memories... SCENE MISSING ...i should be elswhere but i have chosen to be here . exellent . a hint of pefume wanders into my nostrils, jump starting another memory . today is a funny day , not quite good but not quite unbearable , but nothing to set me in that mood . "strange weather lately",blue skies turned grey . but metaphorically , grey skies turend black . meanwhile... freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4 |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***cabes, this is incredible. seriously. so many lines i could quote that seemed real to me...but i'd end up type the whole thing up again. you really are staggering...a real mystery. well done yet again mate.. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Freedom is also the write to say that2+2 = 5, I realy thought this poem was great, and you use your code of writing and style very well . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
thank you both of you , tom , have you read 1984 or is it just a coincidence that it ties in ? |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
WELL THEY CALL YOU CABE, SO IF I MAY I SHALL 2, I LIKE THIS A LOT ESPECIALLY THE MISSING SCENE , I DON'T OFTEN SEE THINGS LIKE THAT. IT IS SHORT BUT SWEET. |
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