Open Poetry #6 |
True Love Never Dies |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
True Love Never Dies ~~~ Those days have faded but not from sight those days of beauty my thoughts unfold When dreams of life from morn till night were love sweet love so true and bold ~ New days have brought the bloom of rose through a milder calmer sea But nothing's half as sweet to hold as loves young dream of you with me ~ Your hallowed form embedded deep my hands still feel your trace Your touch still haunts my every thought your essence thrills my taste ~ When morning breaks your lingered dream and daylight dawns upon your face I smile and snuggle close to you my hand slides round your waist ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
so so sweet Rex Allen--jealous of you two, over here--glad to see ya still around! This was lovely and sincere...enjoyed it much! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
How sweet is to have true love. God I am SO jealous Jeffrey |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is sooooo beautiful....**sigh** Amazing what love can do when it's REAL and not just a word. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I'll agree with all of the above on all three counts, Rex. This is a splendid declaration of love's true life. ~ Claire |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Wow, I relate to some of your feelings. For i had my true love once then lost, just recently found him again. Keep up the good work |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Big *sigh* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bravo!!!well done!!!lovely!!! "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
serenity ... Thankyou ... I'll still be around for a month or so Jeffrey Carter ... thanks ... true love is sweet but we have to be careful not to take it for granted Butterflies_dont_cry ... It definately takes two thats for sure ... one doesn't cut it Claire ... thankyou ... a thumbs up from you is like winning a blue ribbon Lady Web ... good to hear from you ... hope your true love is never lost again WhtDove ... what a nice thing to say A Romantic Heart ... thankyou very much [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Rex, I like the feeling I get from reading this one -- it stimulates my visionsry side! Very nice use of imagery. ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Oh sure Rex go making me all jealous at my hour of need! LOL. It was a truly wonderful poem. Marina |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
TerryW ... thanks Terry ... I'm glad you liked it ... thanks for letting me know Marina ... lol ... ... Sorry ... [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Holy smokes! This is beautiful! Kathleen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Rex! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ I love the romantic side of you ! This is just beautiful. And I'm sure she agrees. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Irish Rose ... ... I havn't heard the term 'Holy Smokes' since I was a wipper snapper ... Thanks Denise ... thankyou again Marge ... I have the strange feeling that my wife agrees with you ... to be sure hoot_owl_rn ... thankyou for always reading my work ... it means a lot to me |
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