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Dark Place |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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I dread this place, so deep & dark A soul destroying, dangerous place A cavernous place that holds my fears and secrets Sometimes hidden, sometimes not Always lurking, beckoning, taunting Ready to awaken the terror Erupting into my consieusnous A place I cannot escape Purgatory, a living hell My memories...... Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
wow...some pretty powerful writing right there...maybe some strong feelings behind that? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, I enjoyed this!! excellent!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
weaubleau.....thanks, words from the heart carry much power, and yes some very strong feelings here. Dark Angel....thankyou just doesn't seem to be enough.< !signature--> Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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allimac12 New Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 5 |
Amazingly converyed feeling. The words you choose are so powerful and do the poem justice. I really liked. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Encompassing Jeffrey |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Angel wings from the heavens above to gather you in and hold you safe while the memories float by for you to see....not relive. This is so strong with emotion, You have written well my friend...I'm moved. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterfly..that is a wonderful thought, I thank you for your valued comments.  Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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