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Open Poetry #6

Never the Last

RAM
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since 2000-03-24

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0 posted 2000-04-12 04:16 PM

Never the Last

Head tilts slightly to the left
right stream hugs a nostril's flair
moistened lips from mourning's dew
salty kisses find a home
one drop flirts with Newton's Law
fat words scribbled through the blur
fun house prism now set free
lightly tracing down the cheek
flow is quickened
or is slowed
as this trace is linked in dream
to the softest caring touch
from a treasured finger's tip.

© RAM 1/22/96

Martie

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1 posted 2000-04-12 05:13 PM

RAM, this is beautiful!

RAM
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2 posted 2000-04-12 05:58 PM

thanks, Martie.

Rick

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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state of confusion

3 posted 2000-04-12 09:48 PM

Lovely imagery, RAM!

Corinne

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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4 posted 2000-04-12 09:51 PM

I crested on it! And that's good!!

Kathleen

Denise

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5 posted 2000-04-13 01:40 PM

Excellent writing, RAM! Wonderful!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2000-04-13 01:43 PM

Ram,
Good words, good thoughts, good poem.

Temptress

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Mobile, AL

7 posted 2000-04-13 03:49 PM

This put excellent imagery in my mind.

Beautiful work here.

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