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Romantic Serenade... an invitation to PARKER...and challenge to poets...Spring Fever! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thank you sweet Parker for your very kind replies, I guess you know by now ... you evoke many a SIGH. Your romantic poems ... make the ladies of Passions swoon, your write such lovely poems, you sing a lovely tune. I am so very flattered by your offer to serenade ... and I just read the first gift of that offer made. Im so pleased you got your poetry fixx -- I thought I'd throw this one in the mix. I'll make a deal here with you on this poem post... think of it as a poetic challenge ... I wish to host. You serenade me...I'll serenade you... and I'm hoping many others will join in too. Lets just see how romantic we can get... I dont know about you ... I've not tired of romance yet. Lets fill this post with poems ... of love, devotion, and trust ... and just for our added pleasue ... a healthy dose of "innocent lust."  We will usher in spring ... with romance, class, and grace, and hopefully put a smile of pleasure on our face... We can even have some fun ... while we rhyme and flirt... if we all promise to TRY to behave ... what could it hurt. (OH DEAR)  LOLSo tell me my poetic friends are you up to this game? Let's make sweet Parker live up to his romantic fame. (nothing like a little pressure huh Parker?)(smile) all in fun...always jm |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh Janet...lol this one is right up my alley! I look forward to the other replies and postings!I wish someone would serenade me with a poem..then I will serenade them back...you go girl...this will be fun!haha!< !signature--> "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
So here I am, in the process of doing a little research, to try and secretly put out a nice little serenading poem. And what comes up before me, in Neon letters no less, but your little challenge telling me to put my butt in gear. This is no fair, and it sure spoiled the surprise. I hope I can live up to this pedestal you've put me on..... and for that matter can't say I've ever done it on a pedestal.  Parker |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh Parker hon, you misunderstand-- I would never rush you or put you on demand. I was only teasing trying to make you smile... and hoping we all could post -- some love poems here for awhile... I would never wish to ruin your sweet surprise... only wanted to write a poem for your kind poetic eyes. As for you up on a pedestal... there you do belong... OH please dont make me beg...sing us your sweet song. And if you serenade me...I'll serenade you... and we will see who else wants joins in the fun too. (as for the doing it on a pedestal... are you still free saturday) LOLOL KIDDING JUST KIDDING..trying to make you smile |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh boy do I have smiles..... So are you supplying the pedestal or should I bring my own.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL im glad your smiling....i feel better now I have lots of pedestals, all shapes sizes and colors LOL see ya SAT with BELLS on LOL thanks Parker jm PS to challenge...I was thinking it would be more fun and make it more of a challenge IF we put all the poems here and WHEN ever we reply...we try to make it a poetic reply...are ya game? [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Romantic Heart, I must confess that I have been afraid To tell you what I think of you in some sweet serenade. Though I have loved your picture and your words since your first day When it comes time to spell it out I don't know what to say. I know by how you speak of love you are the one for me And I would love to know if we can click romantically. You paint such vivid pictures with your poetry so sweet And I can just imagine how it will be if we meet. I picture you in dress of white curled up on the divan. When I come in, you realize that I'm your only man. You slowly rise to greet me....oh, the beauty of your face! I cannot help but take you in a passionate embrace. Your lips meet mine and I explode. My body is on fire And I am lost quite hopelessly in passion and desire. A gentle moan escapes my lips and I hear one from you And all the world has disappeared except for just we two. With skin as soft as your sweet words I'm dazzled by your charms And I could handle anything with you there in my arms. Although I've never felt your kiss, I'm sure it must be sweet. Intoxicated I would be by your lips, should we meet. So there you have them...my emotions boldly on parade Trying to explain my thoughts in this poor serenade. So, if you think I'm not too bad and maybe kinda groovy Just let me know and I'll come by and....let's take in a movie!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH WOW!!!!!!!!! we bow before the master... all else pales in your light... this poem is of perfection a most glorious and lovely site PERFECT Balladeer and yes... you are most groovy... you come on by and I will throw dinner in before the movie thank you!! jm [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Romantic Serenade-(song I wrote-written for? To Janets challenge) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- My love, shall I have this dance, I will serenade you with song, I will hold thy heart into my hands, Embrace you close all night long, Underneath the clouds, the heavens above, Let me shower you with MY song of love... (song I wrote-One True Love) You are my heart I sing, To me your everything, I will give you love, What you dream of, My one true love... And ever you should cry, I'll kiss the tears from your eyes, Forever true.... I'll always love you... My one true love, And when the winds come and go... I'll be the fortress in the rain, I'll be your comfort through the pain, Near or far, where ever you are... My one true love......(goes high with music solo) I would go to the ends of the earth, cross the shores and the seas... deeper than all eternity... To show you...to give you my love..... (Solo) And as the years come and go, Your heart I will forever hold, Together you and me... No regrets will I find, For your love was true to mine, I will be free..... Knowing...My one true love.....Truely loved me..... My One.....True.....Love.....(whisper)I will love you forever...My love! < !signature--> "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm thinking pedestals and such Movies..dinner and packing a lunch To sit and watch the sparks fly And softly whisper..... "oh my" What a thought my S.S. has had and thinking ohhhhhhh she's "bad"  One more thing we do share For this she has a flare! A challenge offered to eachother one question....Parker do you have a brother??? lol Way to go J.M. This should be fun Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Krysondra New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 7 |
A serenade? A game to play? More fun when we have more. A simple little poem To even up the score... I'll send my love a a smile today; I'll send my love a kiss. I'll send my love a little note So that he won't miss. For when he's not around, you see, I miss his bright green eyes. I miss the way he says my name. I miss the way he sighs. Good thing that he's waiting. Good thing that he's near. For I think that I might tell you More than you want to hear. So, serenade and sing your songs. We'll all take the chance, And wait for the reply, To know with whom we dance. And as for me, I'm off to see Those dancing bright green eyes Before the night grows older And he begins to sigh. ~ Krysondra ~ ~Angel of Illusion~ |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Very,very nice work 2 thumbs up!!! Your very good with words from the heart |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh you guys are really good... this will heat things up...it sure should. Lots of romance, desire and Passion... looks love is still in style and in fashion. All us poets better get ready to start... Balladeer already confessed to Romantic Heart. Romantic Heart wrote us such a beautiful love filled song- and Butterfly dropped by to sing along. Krysondra wrote a most lovely and perfect serenade... and I wrote this corny verse...my nights bill is paid. (lol) jm whos next??? [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
all of this beautiful verse set before my eye, romance is in the air, so i guess i'll give it a try... i have to admit, i'm new here, i've never seen your faces, i'm not sure who's my favorite, yet, so can i feel each of your embraces? with loads of love to share, i have enough for all, so whomever is feeling excited, needs only to give me a call. for it only takes a single rhyme to put me in the mood, and thanks to all this poetry, it wouldn't take much to get me nude... with one soft kiss i could take you away your heart racing all the while, and as i hear your breath in my ear, i promise to make you smile... and after the ecstasy has come and gone i still will hold you close, for i am not the ass that it sounds, i only wrote this for a post |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
i hope i didn't offend anyone here... i just read this again and i realize it might have been inappropriate, so i just wanted everyone to know that it was completely light-hearted and i just wrote what popped into my head. i'm really am sorry to all who find it unapppealing... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I was just about to sign off and turn off the light.. ready to call it a day... and sleep away the night... but then I saw this reply and I just gotta tell ya... it really caught my eye. weaebleau this is really great... and its so nice to meet you this poetic reply is romantic and quite spicy too. thanks for joining in the fun just one word of advice before I go... put your clothes back on darlin... your best side is now on show. LOL thanks WB EXCELLENT POEM NICE and SPICY.... thanx for joining in. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Balladeer, I think your groovey, What shall be the movie? Not only are you sweet, But a romantic poet to beat, I loved your poem, I am humbly honored, To have such a man seranade me, With Beautiful words of love and poetry, You have amazed me, I must surrender, My knight was right before me, Shareing a heart so tender, Not only can you write lovely poetry, But your words of humor are so funny, So what tune will you sing your love song to? I will bring some candles as we dance under the moon... "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
I think I've exhausted my romantic juices for the night I had a few thoughts earlier, but now they're just not right I wanted to ask for a kiss, and make it sound real nice But now I'm just too tired, and I think weaubleau stole my spice Balladeer was so charming, he swept RH off her feet Jan is going for Parker, with whom I can't compete Krysondra so filled with skill, seems to have left the party soon She had a date with an Angel, I think his eyes made her swoon There was a pretty butterfly dancing early in the game Now she's waiting for Parker's brother, what was his name? So here I stand as usual, a flower on the wall Watching the pretty people dance, waiting for one to fall My flirtatious Femme is still missing from this happy occasion Maybe she'll dance with me with a little bit of persuasion (smile) ------------------------------------------------------ I do have a poem ready to post I'm just letting it sit on my computer for the night to make sure there's nothing I want to change when I wake up refreshed in the morning. =) I'm not quite as skilled as some of you... takes me three hours to get one to sound worthy of your eyes and you guys can rattle them off in minutes.... Night my lovely poets, have fun or die trying... see ya tomorrow.< !signature--> "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) [This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
White knight come back and stay, You have the right words to play, If I had a chance I will dance, For a Fair maiden needs her knight, To dance underneath the stars so bright, Your poetry I do admire, We could seranade as we promenade, This dance of loves passionate desire, "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All the replies are SO darn GOOD... you poets met the challenge so well-- just like I knew you would. This is fun...making us smile, and inspiring too... you all write with such stlye. Balladeer got his reply from Romantic Heart, WOW I think a dance under the moon... is a perfect place to start. And much to my sheer delight... I even got a poem-- out of my pal Whitenite... and OH its a good one too, he's made his romantic claim-- he even snuck in flirt or two His words were so divine... he got me inspired again, and feeling fine. And back comes the lovley Romantic Heart with reply... and the glimmer of romance, in her smiling eyes. I do believe there is romance in the air... who else is feeling frisky... please take this dare. jm is smiling. whos next? |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
She Waits I’ve never sang a love song Or wrote a sonnet for you But, I’ll sing a song of loves refrain Just to steal a kiss or two She waits with unguarded passions Like the heart that sings this tune, And asks the unbridled questions? In whispers to the crescent moon. Oh enchanter of earthly lovers, Send a spell that I can use tell cupid I need his wonder and some arrows to shoot my muse She waits this darling of passions For a sign that might get through And we watch with wishful emotions At a dream, that we all dream too. Oh enchanter of earthly lovers, Send a spell that she can use Take the heart that put her under And bind it to her with loving glue. She waits this poet of passions For the moon to help her through I wonder if he is listening If not, there’s only one thing to do! Forget him and kiss me you fool. Parker April 13, 2000 "For Janet Marie"  [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Parker my poetic friend ... you make me sigh and swoon. You are the crowned prince of romance, all us chicks think you hung the moon. You words are heaven sent, no woman could ask for more, and of my challenge ... this perfect poem settles the score. You wrote a SO very, lovely song ... a beautiful, sweet, serenade. Its beauty will last forever, these poetic words to never fade. I am so honored that you would do this ... and I'm delightfully giddy ... that you wish to steal a kiss. I'm also touched by you --- that you asked cupid to help me ... that's so very kind of you ... to offer up that plea. For you...just like I ... patiently wait for loves sign. I know your heart longs for another ... a lovely poet of rhyme. And while I'm tempted ... to steal a kiss or two, I hope you'll understand ... that my heart remains true. I will wait here -- with you and the moon ... and we'll write new verse-- to make our poets sigh and swoon. How can they resist our poems... our love they do define. Parker and Janet Marie ... their hearts belong to their partners in rhyme. jm THANK YOU PARKER!! This poem was very beautiful and I am so complimented that you read and included pieces of my poems in this. You made my day with your sweet gesture. ok romantic fools...whos next take care, jm |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
....whispering to Janet, "Who's that flower on the wall?" "He looks to be quite handsome standing there so dark and tall..." "Those brown eyes captivate me, should I ask him for this dance?" "I wonder if he'll think I'm just a flirt, & ditch this chance?" Janet whispers back, "How the heck am I to know?" "Girl, just don't make a snack of him - - go easy, take it slow!"  I look across the crowded room & make my way to him... I bat my eyes & then I see his ever sexy grin... I stop right smack in front of him & kneel down on both knees - "Sir WhiteNite, I am asking you to dance this dance.....er...please?" (batting eyes as if begging!) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Um...I'm not sure how this thread works Janet, was I suppose to reply to Marge since I posted underneath her??? Uh....I'm willing to attempt to profess my love for her, if I have to.....(ahem) Here goes: (blushing) and her name is Mercy Marge - She gets my blood a pumpin' when she takes poetic charge! I like to hold her in my arms and gaze into her eyes... I thought I had to have a man - she took me by surprise! I chase her through the meadows where we get mosquito bit - and I tell ya, when we fool around I have to be half-lit !! (Ahem...)  I've done some thinking Mercy Marge, you're not the one for me - You lack the plumbing that I need I'm straight as straight can be!!! Sorry Marge, I'm just not feeling the *groove* with ya girl - I hope you understand... LOL That chemistry just isn't there toots. (leaving stage in a heated blush with pinkish cheeks for sure!) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI guys... I just saw Gens question.., you may post a poem, or a poetic reply to WHO ever you wish...if you want to profess your "love" for another poet here in Passions(or not) or simply flirt harmlessly with all of them... feel free...if your feeling really poetically friskey..TAKE ON THE WHOLE THREAD LOL its all in fun --no real rules But I gotta tell ya seeing Gen flirt with Marge just made my day....when I stop laughing..Ill reply LOLOLOLOL whos next ??? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Parker posted and made us all swoon and sway... and Margie has requested a dance under the milky way. Oh Margie you wrote a lovely serenade... I hope you'll get a reply from the love for which it is made. And if he don't step up to the plate... (I wouldn't worry) I think Poet Femme just asked you out on a date (LOL) But it seems her eyes are looking toward my pal Whitenite... He left her quite a flirty post ... and a photo in sight. With her he seems most smitten ... but who could resist our Femme kitten. Maybe they will work up the nerve to dance ... we cant find romance...without taking a chance... Lean over here Gen and I'll whisper in your ear... my friend Whitenite is such a dear. So here we all are enjoying these romantic replies... and I again wish to thank Parker for my poetic *sigh* whos next??????? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Now Janet, you know we have great taste in men - But I'm telling you girl, with true love, I can't win!  All of the men here are so scared of me, I can't even (wink), they run screaming from me! LOL Is it my name, or the way that I look? I love to hike nude, and I am a great cook! Janet, do tell me why I have to beg - the men, they just whimper & wet down their leg.... (surrounded by puddles, I am!) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Poet Femme...I wish I knew... Hell if I was a guy...I'd date you. Maybe its your beauty...they wont dare... they think they havent a chance to fare. Perhaps its your humor and quick wit-- they're afraid they cant keep up with it. I truly havent a clue what goes thur mens heads. something once long ago was said... The way to a mans heart is thru his tummy... so hit the kitchen and cook up something yummy. and if that dont work heres my best adivce... send him over to ADULT and show him your spice (LOL) oooooohhhhhh girl Lololol |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
To all the ladies who posted in this thread To look into your starry eyes leaves me feeling blind I could search forever and such beauty could not find And if you care to take a dare I offer you my hand If by chance you should accept your wish will be my command I'm tired of searching day to day for a love so true So tonight I take off my armour and have some fun with you ******************************** Hey ! PFF!....ain't skeered...lol |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
To a very flattering Femme ------------------------- I was standing on the wall so long, I think my legs fell asleep But my heart was racing, anticipating the moment when we meet As I saw you moving towards me, I could hear every beat And now you kneel before me, a tragedy so sweet I can't believe those beautiful eyes, are gazing up at me Grab my hand fair maiden, let me pull you to your feet Of course I'll accept this dance, it's as if a dream come true I thought I saw an angel last night, but now I know 'twas you I can't believe how soft your skin, and how warm your embrace And every heaven I've ever dreamed, I see in your face And if there ever was a glimpse, of something scarey in your eyes To have a chance at this dance, I think I'd compromise --------------------------- (It's not really the ending I was going for but I had to hurry before someone else picked you up off your knees. I saw that look in ol' Jeff's eyes More to come hopefully.) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
(Femme passes out and hits the floor)....Thud..... Janet rushes over to fan her violently! 911 someone - call 911 ! Geesh sir, I thought you were gonna be comical, and then wow...you got steamy on me! Whew! Made my head swim a bit.... Not used to steam! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
I am new here, so don't know anyone but Troy. But I will give this a shot! Sounded fun And you guys are doing a great job! MY LOVE I would shout upon the rafters and yell to the mighty sky and tell the world of my love and how life did not pass me by. Consent my darling - come to my embrace - and I will care for you throughout eternity, yet still give you space Your ruby lips are close to mine and my heart beats with sudden fire Ah, the smell of you - the taste of you - makes me swoon with desire Just one kiss - as our lips will meet and you will feel the heart of me beating upon your chest. You will feel the warmth of my ever faithful lips For you hath granted me the beauty of the poetry in this very passionate place. Thanks all Warm Regards Teresa King www.tipsfortop.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WhiteNite, With such wonderful writing from you I never even had a chance...lol Props Jeffrey |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Romantic Heart, you answered me! You wonderful, sweet lass! The movie that we both will share Is "Splendor in the Grass". And, as we lay 'neath starry sky Upon the grassy blades I promise I will sing to you "Longfellow Serenade"! Geesh! I'm showing my age here! I hope you recognize either one of these |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I had to shut down my computer for a rest... all my Passions posting was putting it to the test. now Im back to see who's joined in the fun... Gen has fanited...Whitenite look what you've done. Darlin' your poem was divine... it read like a steamy valentine. I do believe poet Femm is quite impressed, I do believe her passing out made me guess. Still you better keep on your toes... cause I do believe I heard sweet Jeffery propose, He has asked for the hand of a Passion's maiden... his romantic poem was devotion laiden. He is so sweet and sincere... I know he will find a dance partner here. And it was so cute when he payed Whitenite his props... but never give up Jeff...this dance never stops. Then a new friend joined into the game netswan...what a beautiful name... and oh my such a gifted poet... this serenade sure does show it. you wrote a passion filled verse of fire... ruby red lips...hearts beating with desire. This thread is sure steamy now... I'm feeling a bit flushed somehow. I think I'll bid you farewell for a short time... Im gonna go find my partner in rhyme. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I would gladly give this dance To what fair maiden take a chance? Under moonlit starry skies I shall not tell you honest LIES To the rhythym of a river's flow Oh, to see your face in that pale white glow i'd hope this dance would never end as we twirled again and again 'twoild put a smile upon my face just to feel your warm embrace I would summon the crickets to serenade the sweet surrender of my fair maid never again would you be alone I'd pick you up and take you home And if this threatened to stop our dance I would beg another chance Anyone??? |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Me... comical? Surely you jest I can only pass when romance Is the medium of the test But I'll give it a try, if that's what you need I'll whip up a funny, at my top speed You see I too am fimiliar, with the ones that run All these women that seek no more than some fun They take a look at me and in one glance They can see a future, and I've lost my chance For there is a future, here in my eyes But there is a dance, much to your surprise Although I'm clumbsy, and may step on your feet It'll be a cherrished night, this night that we meet Although I'm not so skilled, at the art of this dance Just wait till you get me home, and out of my pants  I'll try not to smother you, with poems of roses and sand But please don't let this be, another one night stand. (Better?)[This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Janet Marie, you have a partner in rhyme? How very fortunate - a love of all time. Passions stories of wild love, forbidden fruit and exotic dancing Gets me thinking of nights of stormy romancing I thank you kindly for noticing my hurried post Cheers to you - to you I toast! You guys are a lot of fun! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fear I have this strange affliction... or perhaps a poetic addiction. I cant seem to stop speaking in rhyme... in here...on the phone...any time. My friends all think I've gone quite mad they're gonna unplug my computer...this is bad. They dont seem to understand... I must type with poetic hands. But I must admit for the night I am rhymed out. I will return to this though, never doubt. I will get some rest and then my promises I can keep. I off to bed...please lord dont let me talk rhymes in my sleep. night all ... sweet romantic dreams... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I came to this dance in search of romance, I little love and affection too, Balladeer has sang to me a sweet serenade, I feel like a Romantic queen on parade, I am having so much fun, I know the night is not over, For the music has just begun, I came to dance with words of rhyme, To flirt a little and have a good time, I feel like Cinderella, Seeking a poetic fella, So many knights, so much love, What more could a girl dream of? I will dance and seranade to all who Give a chance, To open their hearts by posting poetry of romance, Don't be afraid to let your love show, Open your heart let true feelings show, For who knows? out of this, love will grow? Ps. Yes Balladeer I know of splendor in the grass..but not the song...need words? < !signature--> "Love is not love, till you give it away" [email protected] [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Any Dance Partners Out There For A Little Owl? I step out on the dance floor I'm nervous, I'll admit My dancing shoes are rusty They need broken in a bit I look about the crowded room To see a friendly face Catch your eyes across the floor A smile breaks on your face My heart it's beating quickly I can scarely catch my breath Your eyes they show such promise Such honesty and deepth You reach to softly take my hand To hold it in your own Pull me close into your chest And Lord it feels like home We waltz out on the dance floor Your body against mine Lost up in your warm embrace I am feeling fine You whisper something in my ear I barely nod my head Then hand in hand, we leave the floor Because of what you said Ah...but what was it??? Smiling < !signature--> To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle soar on golden wing Making the song in my heart sing Floating...is this Butterfly With the mention of stary sky Take me on this flight of dream and flow with me within this scene Take my wings and soar with me Take me on to dream with thee But as you know the Eagle does fly Much higher than a wee Butterfly So gather me close to your heart Never allowing our souls to part Oh my Sweet Eagle are you there for this rhyme you have a flare So come with me and what can it hurt To share a innocent little flirt |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this tread is surely oooozing with romance. and many poets return asking for a second dance. all are searching and stakeing their romantic claim... were all enjoying this flirtatous game. And now Hoot-girl has joined in the serenade, she's looking for that moment when eye contact is made. Her song is lovely and her heart true blue. Hoot, I'm sure there is a partner in rhyme just for you. my sweet little butterfly...has fluttered back by... with a perfect verse...hoping to catch a Eagles eye. Balladeer all that you do...you do it with class... you my sir...are splendor in the grass. Romantic Heart is living up to her name... shes so very good at this poetic game. Jeffery and Whitenite...return with promises of true love and devotion. and OH we ladies love those poetic notions. Thank you net-swan for your words so kind... you make me smile and grace my mind. So who next will take a chance... who here can resist romance. |
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Krysondra New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 7 |
*wrings hands and laughs* Oh, dear... Oh, dear.... What can I say? I was gone but just a day... Now, I'm back and far along And see how many sang their songs... Some are hot and some are sweet And each one with it's perfect beat. Words of fire, Words of flame... That caress each new name. We're all involved. We can't stop now. No time for curtain calls. No time to bow. So here's my heart, bared on this board For the angel I love and the rest of the world. ***************** Angel, Angel in my sky, Will you teach me how to fly? You gently mended my broken wings. You gave me a voice with which to sing. You taught me love and how to trust... And some more on how to lust. We're so high, here on your cloud. There is no one else around. You show me now the world so bright And it's all within our sight. So here's to you, my Gabriel, With your silver wings... Let us never forget all the little things That make us love each other so And bind us together Where ever we may go. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I cherish this dance, that you've given me Although I'm a clown, I'm not laughing you see - A tragedy true, yet you helped me stand high With your tender hand, you have helped me to fly... So out on the floor now, it's just you and me I'll teach you to dance, it's so easy, you'll see. Help me be strong - pull me close - hold me tight Cradle me now, be my angel tonight... I need someone strong who will just talk and be - a man I can lean on, who likes me for me... I promise I'm not here to strip you down bare I like you for you - not your cute underwear!  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh how I long to fly Just with you, through blue sky Into the stars where we belong Fly with me, come be strong! Throughout the night, into day My love with me, won't you stay! Sunshine is welcomed for all to see This love we have, you and me My heart now swells and it does sing As we fly along wing to wing Our souls now they do entwine I am yours, will you be mine Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
pFF..dang , just when I went out and bought some boxers with little hearts o 'em....lol Jeffrey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hoot, I'm riding in on my white horse dressed in shining armour Carrying my sword in hand I see your high brick walls surrounded by a mossy moat But it shall not deter me I will not turn around I will swim this mossy moat and loosen the mortar in the bricks of your walls and bring them crashing to the ground And when I see you standing there shivering and scared I shall answer your question I AM YOUR KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR Are you my damsel in distress? Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As the weekend is upon us... romance fill the air. so many poets have joined and taken this romantic dare. Kryonsdra has come back by in search of her angel of love her verse is so enchanting... it sings like a dove. Poet Femm has shined her dancing shoes and is accepting the offer to tango with Whitenite. Who knows what could happen... if the chemistry is right. Eagle One has flown on in looking for a beautiful butterfly... off together they will soar above us in blue sky. Sir Jeffery returns... in search of our maiden Ruth... she is quite the beauty... her picture tells the truth. So we are still in the mood for dancing, we still request the romantic serenade. Who wishes to sing to us now... before the romance fades????? |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Why I came back in here I don't know Just couldn't resist the lovers glow My what talent this group doth have Each of you has such romantic pizzaz Knights in shining armor abound Chasing sweet - lovely damsels around This room is hot - my face is flushed If I were a bit younger I surely would blush Dancing - serenading - and flying with wings This surely makes my heart start to sing Keep on writing love words that flow pitter patter - beat - thud my heart doth go This has been a pleasurable talented room but if I don't leave my heart will burst - BOOM Teresa King |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Where oh where could my Hoot Owl be? I have asked for a dance, but she hasn't answered me. Maybe I was too late, her castle's already been stormed Her night in shining armour her heart's already won But I shall not give up, I shall not turn from the quest I know that at some point this knight in shining armour, a damsel will be blessed So if you are out there listening damsel hoot owl Ruth I am not giving up, I'm saving my dance for you Jrffrey |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
I'm lost in your eyes, and captivated by your stare I hunger for every word you speak, and the poems that you share Still you fall so slowly, scared of the pain you've felt before You've bent until you've broken, but here's what I've got in store If you fall I will catch you, if you cry I'll be there I'll love you if you let me, until then I'll simply care You can tell me all your secrets, I can tell you mine Or if that's too demanding, we can leave the past behind Now our nights at its end, I deffinitely enjoyed this dance Still I'm wanting something more... it's time to take that chance So I lean in so slowly, my heart rest upon my lips From the first day that I saw you, I've been thirsting for this kiss... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This dance is not over...in comes new replies, my friend Whitenite...your poem is perfect... its gonna make us all *SIGH* your words are so romantic...sweet in everyway... I cant wait to see what the fair maiden in question has to say. And back comes Jeffery, with a new serenade... hes waiting to hear from dear Ruth... to see what she thinks of the offer hes made. HOOT he is so romantic...I think hes the real deal.. why dont ya invite him over for your famous oatmeal (LOL) Netswan came back with perfect song... her words are so poetic, we can all sing along... so since sweet romance is still in the air... who will be the next to take this romantic dare... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my, a dance he offers me This Knight in armor shining He storms my castle with his words So calm and so inviting He asks me bare my armor Bridge space across my moat And from the words he's written here He's read what I have wrote He knows this maiden's frightened To let down her defenses And yet he comes so unafraid Could it be he's lost his senses? And I ask, kind Sir, what happens When I stand there bared of all Will you reach out to protect me And catch me when I fall? Or will you take me for a ride Upon your pale white horse Then leave me standing by the road Scared a little worse? I have asked not for a Knight With armor shining bright But rather for a caring man Who'll hold me in the night Who'll face me in the morning hours Who'll kiss my fears away Who'll teach me how to trust again And never go away < !signature--> To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
To my damsel in distress, I can tell that you've been hurt before so I won't lead you on All I wanted was a dance not to take you home. Not that I don't think you're pretty or have a loving heart There's already someone in my life who plays the loving part Sorry if you misunderstood or misconstrued my reply But I thought this was all in fun , I don't know why Jeffrey |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Sir Jeffery 'tis all in fun This little play in rhyme There is no need to be distraught For I too have one of mine I have enjoyed these words of ours Exchanged in poetry And I'm flattered that you've asked to dance With a little owl like me Yes, it's true, I have been hurt And bare my share of scars But I've overcome, and now I am Shooting for the stars Worry not, this owl you see Is not the fragile kind And hearts once broken, so can heal Just keep that thought in mind I fly on wings that once were broke I see with eyes once blind I sing with voice that once was mute And I've put the past behind I've met someone who comforts me Who supports all that I do I'm glad that you have also have Someone who's all of that to you Jeffery...thanks for the exchange and the inspiration. Thanks also for the dance To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Man do I feel Stupid!!!! I Had a bad day yall.....lol But hoot do not fret I'm still saving you my dance. Jeffrey |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
My dearest Ruth I'll be your knight dressed in armor tall, I'll be there just to hold your hand or catch you when you fall. You need not ever worry dear of broken wings and such, I'll mend them with my kind sweet words and soothing gentle touch. Your words have helped inspire me to write some wonderous works, So come with me to fields of green and forget the other jerks. lol....whos next. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Chris...thanks for the smile on this rainy morning Oh Sir Chris, my dance cards empty You may have a dance me We'll waltz around this crowded room As happy as can be We'll show the others how it's done As gracefully we flow Upon the floor with gentle steps We'll move about real slow I'll put my arms around you You'll look me in the eye We'll have the poets talking The rumors will all fly Oh brother, an acomplice And when I do just fine Getting myself in trouble It happens all the time Thanks for the dance |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Oh Ruth you've swept me off my feet my heart, you set to flutter.. and when I look you in the eyes all that I can do is stutter. I'll turn us round this dance floor till our feet can take no more and when you finally kiss my cheek we'll waltz right out the door.... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I can see the rumors flying But I don't seem to care In your arms I'm dancing Floating through the air I can hear your soft voice calling As you whisper in my ear "Just a moment longer" And then you pull me near Time is quickly passing Though it seems it has stood still The nearness of your body here Is taking all my will Alas the dance is ended We stop here on the floor I turn and whisper quietly "Chris, how 'bout one more?" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im so pleased this post is still dancing... poets are still rhyming and romancing. Hoot your gonna have to beat the suitors off with a stick... and I think I smell oatmeal cooking...oh so sweet and thick... LOLOLOL (sorry, I just couldnt resist)... are you laughing with me or at me HOOT LOL As long as poets feel like dancing... this post will never die... and who am I to stop it...I'm not even gonna try jm |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL....Janet Marie, since I've been absent, I missed your response. To set the air clear here, I didn't cook the oatmeal, he did...LOL....but neither of us could seem to find the time to eat it |
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