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Death of Bob on a Broken Cross
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Death of Bob on a Broken Cross |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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And it all fell down Crashing into the ground A little cloud of dust Was all that remained of trust I fought so hard for my way Just to be here make it to today Were you some one else’s friend last night As I stood alone in echoes of light We could have had it all If only it wasn’t for that fall I new it was to good to be true When I fell into all with you Silence screams your name in my head And your ghost still sleeps in my bed Were you some one else’s friend last night After we argued and I lost the light. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Effigy! I liked this alot! Denise |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Effigy~ this is beautiful! Sad too, I really like this!-SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Effigy~ Well, I'd have to admit I didn't get the title at all ... but the content of the poem was pretty cool. Liked this line 'Silence screams your name in my head And your ghost still sleeps in my bed' Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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