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Goodbye Heartache....Hello Love
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Goodbye Heartache....Hello Love |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Goodbye Heartache...Hello Love < !signature-->One simple word was never heard Though I whispered it one day And in your eyes, I read the lies As you turned and walked away One sad goodbye, “I’ll never try To love again,” I said I trusted you, that’s all I knew And you left me there for dead One heart now stone, once yours to own Rock solid to the core I sadly grieved, justly believed That I would love no more Whispered soft to me one day And in his eyes, I saw no lies As he turned and came my way One brief hello, How could I know That once again I’d feel Trust set me free and now I see With time, all wounds can heal One beating heart, one brand new start A chance to live again I’m ready now, just show me how To let true love begin To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
This is beautiful, you have a way with words.  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~nice presentation and so well written~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Two beautiful poems, Ruth! Time does heal all wounds. Sometimes it just takes longer than we would like! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marvelous! I feel jiggly inside for you!  |
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pmc Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 48Germany |
Absolute Poetry Great work Patrick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, Enjoyed this very much, you showed both sides of the coin. *L* |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I'm with PdV ..... feeling 'jiggly' here, Hoot ........ Beautiful piece ...... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Very, very nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So nice that there is another side to loving..beautiful poems! |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Hoot: Once again, you take my breath away - what a wonderful story of loss and renewal, and so elegantly told!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I always want to help others up... but I ever kick against the pricks if it's myself. |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
I found this very enjoyable. I love the change in hue from that of one being blue to that of one being on fire. Rich |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No doubt about it....Time does wound all heels! Comings and goings - hellos and goodbyes - all a part of life as we know it. Nice writing, Ruth. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ruth, My heart is fluttering. Check out my next post to see what you have inspired. Jeffrey |
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