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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
Life I once had a daughter who trusted in me I remember her childhood, the fun, the laughs and the glee It would shine from her face - always landing on me A life so young - it's cruel, you see. Life. School was not easy she struggled along School was tough - So was I - I was wrong. But how can one redeem? What's happened and gone You can't - we all try - and have to move on. Life. Its not that easy, in fact, it's incredibly hard Full of torment and pain Something, I feel, will always remain. Life. When one's only true possession is abused Life's real meaning must surely be mused Even sweet words written kindly by friend or bard Still leaves torment and pain - it's so hard. Life. I will get over and come out on top - I must. For the torment and pain must surely stop I find it so hard to endure year by year It never gets better, always a tear There's no justice here. Life The tears have been plenty and not hard to find Not like the true friend I now have in mind But that's another matter, it'll workout fine - But. The walkout - The marriage - Was so unkind Life And now there's a new face to add into her life They come in different sizes - You see, she's a wife Look after - Cherish - But above all keep him close He's yours forever But I love you the most. [This message has been edited by PeterPeter (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
This is sad yet beautiful, the love for your daughter shines bright. I enjoyed this poem. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi PeterPeter, By your words it seems that you now understand for the most part what went wrong and you seem to posses the strength to come out on top, I wish you the best of luck. Very nicely done poem, Cerenity Do you know how to post replys yet ???? e-mail me if you need help with anything. |
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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
Hi Cerenity, Thanks for the understanding, Yes I do know what went wrong. [This message has been edited by PeterPeter (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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