Open Poetry #6 |
Sick and tired of being sick and tired |
marty11 New Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 5Lubbock, Texas |
No one really knows how I feel inside. And yet day-to-day I stay alive. It's but a few people that keep me going and going. But the cancer of my soul keeps growing and growing. I've come to a point to know that no one really cares if I come or go. My hands aren't tied but my hearts not free. For my mind has it locked up so it can't clearly see all of my soul's greatest fears. That when I cry, no one will help to dry my tears. If I only had three wishes, I'd only need but one. For up till now, my life has been a lie. If I only had my wish, I wish I would... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really well written poem...I can only hope you will wake up to a better day. James |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions - Hang around for awhile - You'll no doubt find there are more than just a few here who care quite a lot... Check your email for a special greeting.. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi marty11, Yes life can feel this way but I have found that something is always right around the corner. I think you are going to find that this place of passions is full of people that are over flowing with love and very caring. Welcome to passions, Cerenity |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***marty11, "sick of being sick tired of being tired bored of being bored." ~manic street preachers~ this poem is really emotive. so truthful. a fantastic first post. i look forward to reading more of your work. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
First let me say Welcome to passions If it's a shoulder you need you will find plenty of them here. Live for today...Who knows what new adventures await Jeffrey |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
passions is the place to be when you're feeling like this... hang in there. things WILL get better. great poem. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I'm so sick and tired of these folks that are always sick and tired of being sick and tired. LOL...Welcome to passions...and really, being sick and tired of being sick and tired is a good sign...So? Do something about it! Write some poetry.....write some funny poetry....it'll cheer ya up.....People are all sick and tired of my crap I write....but it does cheer one or two up sometimes?.....again..welcome! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Toe's right!...geez I thought I would never admit that one...okay..toe's right...write to your heart's content and in doing so you will be content. Trust me on this one. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Hi Marty, i liked your poem a lot, thanks for sharing it with us and welcome to Passions i think you`ll find a lot of kindred spirits here i know i have. Hope to see more of your work Nameless |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Oh, and one more thing...There's a whole bunch of ladies that I don't know how "they feel inside"....but I'm so very willing to find out?.....LOL |
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marty11 New Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 5Lubbock, Texas |
Thanks guys for your support...things have kinda got better since I wrote that poem a few months ago, but still from time to time feel lost. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marty11, Welcome to Passions. Indeed, this is the place to share those feelings. Most here have expressed similar sadness at some point. Great first post. INclan |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hi Marty- Welcome to the Passions Family. Snacks to the left..music to the right, oh and lots of wonderful people all around ya..ok my attempt at humor for the day. Anyway, I really loved your poem and could relate to it on many different levels. I hope you continue to put out some more of your work. I look forward to reading it. Take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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