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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Your love is a miracle a treasure in my life I am so honored being your wife You are honest, so sweet and it's true I'm constantly amazed by all that you do You are patient, gentle and kind Each day new joys, with you I find You are so funny, loyal and incredibly smart, Your love completely fills my heart You are handsome, yet modest and shy but you know you melt me with a wink of your eye You are everything I could ever need and more, You are my husband, the man I adore. -SEA- [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Awwww... lucky guy "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
And this is how love should be, SEA~ Lucky both of you  Marie~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WhiteNite~ thanks for reading, I'm the lucky one! Mariee~ yes, this is how it should be!  I'm so glad this is the way it is for us!-SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a beautiful love you have. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, how beautifully you put into words, my own love for my husband! I'll have to show him, and I thank you for giving me even more ways to say how I feel about him! ~ ~ ~ Lovely, tender, loving poem - well worded and much appreciated! ~ ~ ~ I would think your husband would be very touched by this. Any husband would be. There are far too few love poems in this world, between married couples who know such deep and special love. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sea-girlie girl this is YOUR best how sweet and perfect... nice to know the honeymoon aint over how long ya been married to this dreamboat? very cool poem. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ THANK YOU!!  you are much too kind...we have been married almost 3 years and have been together 6 years, but I've known him since I was 14 years old, we dated in high school. Can you say "Love Story?!" -SEA |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Your poem offers hope to all of us lonely hearts Jeffrey |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
I can only hope that one day someone should feel as strongly for me. A very nice poem. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jeffrey~ I'm glad! Effigy~someday, someone will -SEA |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
A very lucky man he is. Rich |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How dare you flaunt your happiness that way!!! LOL! Sea, you an your husband are truly blessed to have one another. Was this poem, like, to get him to do the dishes or take out the garbage? hehe. No, probably not. Your sincerity shines through, sea. I'm very happy for you. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Dear SEA - I just read your little note on another poem, and turned and hollered to my husband - "hey! She home schools too! Wow! Where's her e-mail addresss? What! She doesn't have one? Oh, man, I've got to contact her, even if only for one sentence!" He turned and grinned at me. "Well, leave her a message somewhere!" He suggested. ~ ~ ~ Here I am again, still loving your poem, and to tell you and we have home-schooled for fifteen years! Most of our children have never been prisoner inside a schoolroom. Our last school-aged daughter is graduating this spring. What am I going to do? I have loved it so much! And yes, it's great to take those days off, and just enjoy each other. Oh, I wish you would write me sometime about homeschooling. mountainrecluse@yahoo.com |
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Ella Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 20 |
Your poem is absolutly beautiful. You sound like you have the most adorable husband in the world. You definately lead us to believe in love. Ella |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Does he swoon for you? He better, you got me swooning now SEA...*L* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's your husband that's the lucky one, To have a gal like you, It's obvious in the way you write, Cuz you're one of very few. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
SEA, nice poem about that very significant other of yours. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Richter_9~ yes he is!LOL Poet~ thanks! Balladeer~ actually, he had called to tell me he bought me a new vaccuum cleaner and a playstation game I wanted, and then I wrote this He is wonderful, he reads my mind and does for me unselfishly. BTW~ I never make my man do household chores!Ella~ thanks! I do! JML~ he didn't exactly swoon, but he liked the poem,you made me BLUSH!!  Toe~ hugs to you sweet man! Danny~ thanks! -SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Wishing I could find a guy like this... You are truly blessed, SEA!Hugs, m'friend ~ Becka |
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