Open Poetry #6 |
Slug Bug Blues (with my Daddy) |
Michael II Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 21Here, there, everywhere |
SLUG BUG BLUES By Mikey & Michael Anderson Slug bug red, Smack Dad's head! Slug bug blue, That's new - worth two. Doesn't matter where we go, We always play slug bug, you know? Purple one's, pink one's, greens and tans, Convertibles and Slug bug vans... Playing Slug Bug with Dad's the worst, He always says he saw them first! I swear that little Mikey cheats! He calls them after I pass the streets... Punch the arm, smack the chin, Dad's just mad cause I always win. Mikey, my son, what can I say, You know you just got lucky today! Daddy, what the heck do you call that? |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Looks like a SLUG BUG Rainbow to me!!! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Michael 1&2, It does not get any better than this, you guys are a class act, I'm sending you to hollywood this is great, gee I forgot you could probably walk there...LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think it's a slug bug cadillac! Awww...this is just incredibly sweet... thank you for the warm heart tonight! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is great you two! So cute! I fully expect to see father-son epics pretty soon here! *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
The only Michael poet I like more than one is Michael II, cause he's so fun and what's with this car of many hues bet there's only one, couldn't come in twos! You both did a great job. Dad, if you keep this up, you could be as good as Mikey! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Definantly like father like son...!!! *You two are adorable together!!!* This was just the thing I needed to hear tonight...thanks lil sweetie...and big sweetie!!! Love ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL, this was just too cute! I'm glad to see ya posting again Mikey! With your Dad at that. Great poem and the picture just made a grand slam. This was great, thanks for the smile you two! |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I'll have to agree with White Dove on this one....I was grinning for ear to ear as I read, and the picture at the end made me laugh outloud!!! My brother and I used to play that game so much our arms would be black and blue! Thanks for the great poem! Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael and Michael II~ Sounds like a great title for future ventures in fun. This was WONDERFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Mikey, this is wonderful!!! I still play slug bug with my son and he's 18. My arm gets awful sore these days though cuz he got so much stronger thru the years. Thanks for the smiles guys. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh now see?!! This is wonderful!! Michael, my friend, Mikey always wins cause he's still young and spry... (Hmm..same reason my girl always wins lol) Keep it up guys! May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
LOL, excellent work both of you, wonderful to see a father and his son working together on something |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey this is really cool..nice writing..both of you...I've been trying to stir up my three sons interest in writing..still hoping. James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is cute you two |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So good to see you again Mikey This piece brought many smiles ... Great job !!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Mikey - you are truly the Slug Bug Champion of the universe... Love ya son, thanks for letting me be part of your poem. Daddy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey guys, this is soooo cute, thanks for the smiles What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
How refreshing!!!!!!!!!!! You two gave me a reminder that love and fun can be shared no matter what....and I would call that car a reason for slug bug *hugs* |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so cute, you guys! Sounds like fun!! Denise |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Mikey & Micheal this is so cute.you two make the perfect duo ~Angie |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
I really loved it...I still have a big smile on my face..thank-you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mikey & Michael: I enjoyed this immensely! *S* |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I am in love with the Bug and this poem just made my day! Good job! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
WOW!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I am in love with the Bug and this poem just made my day! Good job! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Panthers Chrysalis Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 51 |
Great poem! I had to forward it to my boys! Whom have also taken me by surprise on many occasions- not too mention possibly added a few bruises to my being at times.... from the slug bug phenomena!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Michael and Mikey, this is so cute! |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I came across this as I was "cruising" the archives... Stottbear and I play this same game from time to time... and somehow she always seems to win... perhaps she cheats also. This is a great write, and I thoroughly enjoyed it!!!! http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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