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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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- - Sensual Clay - - Take me now I am sensual clay manipulate me have your way... Knead my soul shape it to your delight create as you wish do me right... Mold me now please manipulate me I yield to your touch set me free... Sculptor mine - I am yours - have your way your hands on my flesh I'll obey... Hands so strong pressing into me deep I'm sensual clay make me weep... Take me now I'll obey your command I'm putty - it's true in your hand. ~~~~~~~~ -poetFemmeFatale April 11, 2000 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Woohoo one to get the ol ticker going  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Gulp. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehe WhtDove, I didn't know you smoked!  and er....Mike? Was that *gulp* a compliment??  ROFLMAO |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
PFF? Can I be your potter....LOL Jeffrey |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ouch. Like I needed a jump-start! (It sure is getting warm in here....but as they say in N'awlins--it's not the heat--it's the HUMIDITY...) y'know I LOVED this...Great work pFF...thank you. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
When I turn 50 and get my little red sport car ... can I call you?  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Man do I NV you! Two in one day? I'm lucky to put together two words that rhyme.. much les two entire poems.... well... and have them come out as nice as these anyways... Ya know... if I had a lover that wrote poetry like this..... well... lets just say it made me thirst for a kiss. =) "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well, i knew this one was gonna start something LOLperfect poem femme...i bet i know where an find another version that will melt clay LOL HEY BEH...STOP THAT !!! LOL (inside joke) ask danny LOL later girl, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow. . . this is great!! pFF, you always find new ways to amaze me. . . Excellent my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elliott Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 35Chapel Hill, NC |
you rock. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
OK....did you do anything but write poetry today??? You could have done wonders with this one in adult let me tell ya! You are hot today...ANOTHER excellent piece. three strikes now your out! Marina |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AH, Femme, you could have, er, be the perfect bust. I'd love to take you up on your offer but I don't wanna be arrested for statue-atory something-or-other  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
pFF~ Whew! Hot!Hot!Hot!! Love it. -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love this...a sensual fantasy...James |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written Gen |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Jeffrey - - ROFLMAO !! You make me giggle, and now I need to pee! (oops, did I say that? ) LOL serenity - - Sorry...didn't mean to *JOLT* you! Rex - - You kill me man!  Yes - you can! LOLWhiteNite - - (still puckering!) LOL You're so funny, now I know why JM likes you! hehe JanetMarie - - No fair! No inside jokes! Where's that Danny when you need him?? DANNY !!?? Sven - - **blushing** Thank you sir. Elliott - - Comments like that make me feel ~young~ again! hehe THANKS! Marina - - Whew...yep...all out.  Balladeer - - ROFLMAO You're just FULL of funnies lately, aren't you? Quack! SEA - - *hosing you off* JmLee - - My fantasy...well, one of them! Ruth - - LOL Thank you Ruthie! Sheesh...I'm glad you all liked this, you don't know how hard it was to write something like this and not use....well, you know...WORDS like I like to use! I tried to keep it *low key* so as to not get thrown out of here! LOL Thanks for all the gulping and such! LOL I'll see you all in Adult ! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
WOW a third time today! I better fly though, or I'll be late for work. Plus, with the way this one is headed I might not make it out the door after the next without...well...stepping off. |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
wow. that's all i'm going to say...wow. |
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