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Your Ride
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Your Ride Up in the front car Hands held high Clank, Clank, Clank Nothing but Blue sky Pulse slamming Breath quick Surrounded by life like a lovers embrace Your Life`s your ride But who`s on the switch Just make it amazing Experience rich Hit me with it,Hit me hard Slam the complacency Burn it charred Fears to Fear are missed chances Unwritten poetry Undanced dances Screams of the dying are things unsaid Affairs of the Heart not of the head So take a hard look And don`t miss a chance Because the music might stop Before you dance that dance |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Tell me about it... I once wrote a poem along the same lines called "taking chances"... you have to take them when they come or live with the regret that your chances are gone. Great poem. "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love the style of this - fast and succinct - good stuff!  |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Yes ! Whitenite and is there anything worse than regret,thanks for the comments Severn,thank you for giving it a read |
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