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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
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Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-09 04:41 AM


two speed life

my life`s on a double cycle
there`s the with you
and the wanting to be
the latter stops the clock
and the other lets the hands fly free


dsaucier

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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-09 04:45 AM


Excellent.

Concise and delivers the message.  Yes time does fly when we're with that special one.

Welcome to Passions

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


INclan
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since 1999-07-20
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Indiana, USA
2 posted 2000-04-09 05:45 AM


Nameless Une,

welcome to passions.  I could not agree more with your well written poem,  A good first posting.

INclan

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-09 08:55 AM


This is so fantastic, short but grand.
Welcome to passions, I'm sure you'll like it here  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


lindak6
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 9

4 posted 2000-04-09 10:36 AM


Father Time marches on, the more we try to catch up, the more he runs  

mariee66
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since 2000-01-30
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Recess, OfYourMind
5 posted 2000-04-09 11:02 AM


I know of this two speed life~
The time flying by~
And feeling time stop~

You have written this very well~
WELCOME!

Marie~

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2000-04-09 11:15 AM


Your life is delivered to us in a 5-second read
Excellent
Liz

NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
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Biloxi MS
7 posted 2000-04-10 02:08 AM


thank you all...you make me feel very welcome here
weaubleau
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 101
MO
8 posted 2000-04-10 02:17 AM


this is so true...

when you're with someone you really care about, there never seems to be enough time, but when you're waiting to see them again, it seems you are waiting for years.

very nice!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
9 posted 2000-04-10 11:58 PM


Hi  NamelessOne,

This is wonderful, look forword to more of your work.
Welcome to passions,

Cerenity

NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
10 posted 2000-04-11 02:53 AM


Hi Cerenity-1
Thanks

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2000-04-11 08:00 AM


Yeah and if your at work and don't keep really busy it seems like the clock stops.  And if you're just a little late getting to an important meeting it seems like the clock is going three times faster than it should be.ha...ha...James
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