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NamelessOne
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0 posted 2000-04-10 06:11 PM




take the step into the void
and test your wings so new
it`s been inevitable for so long
so take a ride on what is true
you want to change
so shed your skin
the beauty is there
it lies within
so take the step and you might be surprised
how far you go
how high you fly

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2000-04-10 06:15 PM


very uplifting...makes me wanna fly!
Corazon
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2 posted 2000-04-10 06:24 PM


whew, me too, seems I have written a few of these but still wear concrete boots...here's to someday, here's to tomorrow!
EagleOne
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3 posted 2000-04-10 06:35 PM


This reminds me very much of a friend, but I know when the time is right she will certainly fly. This is great, thanks!

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-04-10 07:06 PM


Wonderful little poem!. Love it
Liz

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-04-10 09:27 PM


Good one..though some people may need a push to take that step!!  
Tara Simms
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6 posted 2000-04-10 10:13 PM


I love the positive message in this one!  

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



NamelessOne
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7 posted 2000-04-11 02:40 AM


Thank you all for your kind words
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