Open Poetry #6 |
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Take the step |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
take the step into the void and test your wings so new it`s been inevitable for so long so take a ride on what is true you want to change so shed your skin the beauty is there it lies within so take the step and you might be surprised how far you go how high you fly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting...makes me wanna fly! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
whew, me too, seems I have written a few of these but still wear concrete boots...here's to someday, here's to tomorrow! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This reminds me very much of a friend, but I know when the time is right she will certainly fly. This is great, thanks! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful little poem!. Love it Liz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good one..though some people may need a push to take that step!! ![]() |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I love the positive message in this one! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Thank you all for your kind words |
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