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babeluv73
Junior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 19

0 posted 2000-04-10 06:05 PM

Trust Me

I try to express myself on paper,
A paper that will never understand,
The loves that runs so deep,
As deep as the grains in the sand.

Many have played a factor,
In keeping us apart,
I’ve cried these endless tears,
For the hole left in my broken heart.

We value their opinions,
No matter how much they keep us in the dark.
But if you trust me
Then trust this love,
And together we won’t let it fall apart.

[This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).]

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

1 posted 2000-04-10 06:38 PM

I like your work, hope you plan to post some more. I will keep an eye out.

Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2000-04-10 08:18 PM

~Babe

I really liked the flow of this. this was poetically sad and tender. keep up the writing. look forward to reading more from you.

take care

A M Y

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

weaubleau
Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 101
MO

3 posted 2000-04-10 08:20 PM

it's true...

anything is possible with enough work...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-04-10 09:11 PM

Babe~
Welcome to Passion's.
Anything is possible ...
keep on believing in the trust.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

babeluv73
Junior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 19

5 posted 2000-04-11 09:34 PM

i hope you guys realize how much your comments mean to me. They are gretly appriciated.

babeluv

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

6 posted 2000-04-11 09:37 PM

splendid show of emotions in this one
i like it alot

Jeffrey

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

7 posted 2000-04-12 11:15 AM

Hi Babeluv!
Love and trust always goes together. I'm sure your friend trusts in you. Cheers lady!
A_L

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