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devil_tongue
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2000-04-12 03:20 AM

I dwell admist the haze,
Of melancholy emotions.
The dark shadows lean taller,
And conceal my wounded face.

The stench of misery,
Sends ripples up my nose.
Disgracing what was a human,
But is now a ghastly creature.

Memories taunt my shattered heart,
And pull the strings attatched.
I am a mere puppet now,
A despondent flask of life.

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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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since 2000-04-02
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1 posted 2000-04-12 06:14 AM

Wow, such intensity, and well written, I could see the strings at the end. Awesome piece of writing.
devil_tongue
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2 posted 2000-04-12 11:44 AM

Thanks for the reply.  
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