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Trust in Love
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Trust in Love |
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MoonOnTheOcean New Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 8 |
Falling so hard, Falling so fast, Evermore quickly, I'm afraid it won't last. The look you give, The things you see, Are all the ways you reassure me. Trust in beauty, Trust in love, Hold my heart to Heavens above. Love me truely, Love me deep, Love me always, Even in sleep. Sins we've sinned, Boundaries we've crossed, But may I always have you, And my soul never lost. For you are why I laugh, For you are why I cry, So remember me always, Even after We die. (this one is fresh. I just wrote it lastnight). |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
If you love a person so deeply there is no way it can go wrong. I wish both of u a very happy lifetime and lovetime!!!!!!!! A_L |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
i hope it does last as i know this poem will, great work Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MoonOnTheOcean~ This is really quite lovely. Refreshing as well as 'fresh'.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Moon, may your prayers be heard above. . .and may you always know the joys of true love. . . Wonderful words. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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babeluv73 Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19 |
Don't worry, the lord hears your prayers. Whatever happens will happen for the best. I hope neither of you ever let go of that love. Great poem! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I love this poem, but I have to disagree with amazon lover..My heart was comsumed by a love this deep and it was ripped to shreds anyway Jeffrey |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is great, I love it! Just when you think you can't feel this again someone comes along to make you trust in love again. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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MoonOnTheOcean New Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 8 |
Thank you all for you kind words. I'm sorry, Jeffery, that you were hurt so. I feel for you. I love this forum, and how you can get other people's input. It's nice to know what others think of your writing. -Travis |
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