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INclan
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0 posted 2000-04-08 01:37 PM



Kids sit in a row
Awaiting the moment to play
Well practiced hands
Aromas of sight and sound
Inspiring recital

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Songbird
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1 posted 2000-04-08 01:41 PM


I remember some intense moments like that!
Destiny
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2 posted 2000-04-08 02:09 PM


amazing the jitters a few lines can bring back...

Destiny  

Pepper
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3 posted 2000-04-08 03:12 PM


I agree with Destiny ..... 'S'
Wonderful , Inclan ..

 "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars."
_Les Brown_

Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-08 11:12 PM


This is great! I enjoyed this!

Denise

INclan
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5 posted 2000-04-09 12:02 PM


Septsong, I too remembered while sitting waiting for my girls to play.

Thank you, Destiny, I try.

Thank you, Pepper.

Thank you, dsnyder.

It was a good recital!

Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-04-09 12:54 PM


Glad to hear it, INclan.  Sometimes I think it can be more nerve-racking for the parents than the kids.....
INclan
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7 posted 2000-04-09 02:00 PM


Balladeer,

I loose nails EVERY time....lol. Thank you for responding.

INclan

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2000-04-09 07:05 PM


And I felt sorry for the piano teacher...
very apt portrayal here...just the right edge of intense...nice...

INclan
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9 posted 2000-04-10 09:22 AM


Serenity,

in thinking back, you are right....the poor teacher did look a little stressed. Thank you for responding.

INclan

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2000-04-10 09:39 AM


INclan,
I've had that feeling. Enjoyed the shorty.

INclan
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11 posted 2000-04-11 07:03 PM


Thank youSeymour. This brough back memories for many people.

I am surprised that no one noticed this poem was also acrostic.  The frist letter of each line spelling KAWAI, the piano that was played.

INclan

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