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The Magical Mystic Mystery Man
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The Magical Mystic Mystery Man |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Magical Mystic Mystery Man He walks around the neighborhood And stops to talk a while I never saw the man before But recognize the smile And try to place him, best I can This magical mystic mystery man He comes to me and takes my hand And says you aren’t of wealth or fame But yet they call you as a queen For you possess her very name He stares at me as though to scan My inner self, this mystery man Then pointing to my hand he notes Your ring is gone, I plainly see It fell into the muddy pond This secret known by only me A ring of gold slipped from my hand Into the mind of the mystic man He then looks on to future days A mountain journey you will make A Colorado mountain top A trip that I am soon to take How does he know my travel plan This magical mystic mystery man? Then curiously I seek to know The answers to my destiny Who will I marry, knowing well My German love it’s sure to be He comes from the Amazon River land Says the magical mystic mystery man I would never see this man again He wasn’t really from that place He happened through the neighborhood And came to gaze upon my face At times I yearn to understand The wondrous mind of the mystic man So abundantly bestowed to few These powers of a psychic hue He knew my life by the touch of my hand This magical mystic mystery man Elizabeth Santos |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
We in Passions know your heart from the wonderful poetry you write. This is another example of your incredible talent. always a pleasure to read your work. dh [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You write so well I love all you poems. I hope you are well and taking care. LOve Sy |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
I`m in awe at the quality of your work and the ease with which it just flows off the tongue...you`re making a junkie out of me Thanks |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Elizabeth, you flow like a peaceful stream on a warm summer's day....another wonderful entry. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I think I've this man before One day knocking on my door He told me of a talent so true Then he showed me a picture of you Great poem Liz Jeffrey |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz, I just love this!! The poem is wonderful as is the idea...is it true?? |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
your poetry is truely enchanting. i love your work. great poem. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Who are you and why am I in your poem?  j/kGreat poem Elizabeth |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is a wonderful poem..and a great story!! I loved it.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Danny, Your remarks are very kind. I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem Sy, Thanks, dear friend, for always reading Nameless, Thank you. Your comments overwhelm Balladeer, Thanks, Master Poet Jeffery, Did you understand his Portuguese? Thank you for your little poem Martie, I don't have the imagination to create a story. This is all true. It happened in Brazil one New Years Eve, when everyone was dancing in the street. weaubleau, Your response is very kind. Thanks Mistikman, Sorry if I stole your name. Do you have psychic powers?.Thank you so much for reading and commenting PDV< Yep this is a true story. Glad you like it. Thanks Denise, my guardian angel, always there to read. Thanks Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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