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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-09 08:53 PM

touch my heart
     touch my soul
          only you can give me
               what i need to feel whole

take my hand
     take my life
          this is what i desire
               i will make the sacrifice

accept my arm
     accept my love
          together we can find
               the beauty up above

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2000-04-09 08:58 PM

Sven,

Very nice. I also like the sliding format. You are starting to remind me of Marge.

INclan

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

2 posted 2000-04-09 09:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem very much! I look forward to reading much more!

"It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-04-09 10:16 PM

Sven~
This is soooooo pretty.
Your heart is on your sleeve
and I like the view.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Jewl_24_1999
Member

since 1999-10-24

Posts 64
USA

4 posted 2000-04-09 11:23 PM

Sven,

I love this, it was very beautiful. I just love your work.

wolfman
New Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 2

5 posted 2000-04-09 11:26 PM

Very good poem Sven. I like the way you describe love.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

6 posted 2000-04-10 05:05 AM

This was very romantic(sigh). Letting that special one know how you feel

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

7 posted 2000-04-10 05:08 AM

Wonderful Sven

Showing your feelings and desire, whoever it is, they are a very lucky one indeed!

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

8 posted 2000-04-10 01:27 PM

This is truly beautiful Sven. What a very lucky lady she is!

Marina

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

9 posted 2000-04-10 01:35 PM

Sven, this is so simple, yet overflowing with devotion and desire...just lovely.

~ Claire

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

10 posted 2000-04-10 01:41 PM

Nicely done~
Romantic... ahhhh...
Marie~

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

11 posted 2000-04-10 04:11 PM

Sven, I so enjoy reading all of your work.
This was especially sweet.

Joanna

What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2000-04-10 09:16 PM

Sven....touching poem. She is very lucky whoever she is. Nice work.

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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