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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-04-09 06:44 PM



Dear, thy not fear to love someone...
I've felt the pain of not being loved..
For life can be painted beautiful
With events and people blissful

Take the pain out of you my dear
I'll never come to you so near
Never you worry for this saint
I wish you should just love, to paint

Never paint your grievings of begone love
Paint the fresh ones you really care and love
I'll be a lover in disguise
Which shalt be thy advice

Let thy hand never have me painted
If its going to make it tainted
I'll respect and love you with honor
Eventhough you paint me with a blank toner

I'll begin to paint one
Which I'll never show it to anyone
It'll be your lovely portait


Start painting dear...
I'd like to look it before I die..
To die with the satifaction
Of you letting me in your life and love for a few mins.

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-04-09 08:38 PM


Now this IS sweet...love the analogy...more please...
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-04-09 08:49 PM


Thanks.. I'll improve and hopefully our relations also might improve.
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