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MoonOnTheOcean
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0 posted 2000-04-09 02:39 PM


As I pass under-leaf of the Hallway of Trees,
I see the melodic greens of the leaves turn amber.
Green grass lays like a carpet woven with threads of life beneath the trees.
Ivy hangs from the outstreched limbs,
dangling playfully on the soft grass.
I remember laying in that grass,
with ivy hanging and trees glowing.
I remember like I lived it a thousand times.


[This message has been edited by MoonOnTheOcean (edited 04-09-2000).]

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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2000-04-09 02:49 PM


MoonOnTheOcean,
Wow....this was excellent.  I can just picture myself laying there in the grass.  I love it!!!     

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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2 posted 2000-04-09 03:15 PM


Superb Images!

Wonderfully done Moon

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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3 posted 2000-04-09 07:17 PM


MoonOnTheOcean~
This is LOVELY ...
Serene is the green of the ivy
touching the grasses.
Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-04-09 10:10 PM


a beautiful portrait of ivy, as it spreads so do your words with joy.

 Kathleen


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