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~Little Miracles~
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~Little Miracles~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Little Miracles~ Sitting in a sunbeam on the cool kitchen floor, watching the sunset thru the open back door. Soft breezes come in thru the tattered screen, God's artistry paints the sky in a violet washed scene. The stereo jams ... my body takes in the deep base, the sunlight warms and tans my tear streaked face. Within this fragile moment ... I discover the place, you exist in me. The gift of this miracle ... for once, I am content to simply ... just be. If I hold my breath ... can I make time mercifully stand still ... Should I never move ... can I stop the arrival of until... Janet Marie *for my partner in rhyme thank you for the inspiration, always. The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Within this fragile moment... I discover the place, you exist in me The gift of this miracle... for once, I am content to simply.. just be JM, This is a real piece of work. Truly inspirational. I was moved by it. Thank you for sharing. Jeffrey |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I like it~ Marie~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Janet This was so beautiful and peaceful! It brought a tear to my eye. I think we rush around in life so much that sometimes we lose sight of the "little miracles". Thanks so much for the reminder. As always I stand in awe of you and your wonderul work. Love ya, AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Janet, this is wonderful... it's always important to take time out for the "Little Miracles" of life. . . thanks for the reminder. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ In this moment one miracle appears 'can I stop the arrival of until' Tender moment shared. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
this is lovely, Janet! Looking forward to more of your posts! Corinne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful thoughts here. This touches my heart Incidentally, I am enjoying reading some of your responses to other poems, your precious little verses Liz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful, JM, I know this moment, and it is exquisite! (But don't forget to breathe...lol, that AIR THING is absolutely vital!) Admiration here, once again...(hope applause doesn't bore you...) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Simply love the last line, wonderful poem. *L* |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Hmmm... I read your peom this morning on another message board and I liked it a lot... but I'm just now making the connection that for the first time in a year or so I'm sitting in the house with all the windows open letting a cool breeze blow through. Hmm... subconcious mind must have liked it too... anyways. Cool poem.< !signature--> "We always said it would be good to go away, someday, but if there's nothing there to make things change, if it's the same to you I'll just hang." --Matchbox20 (Hang) [This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very pretty, Janet Marie. ~ Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This poem is just wonderful! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree with all. It's a wonderful piece.... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well written, lots of visualisation. Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Stirring poem, i was touched Thanks |
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Purnima Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 12India |
Very peaceful...Loved it! Purnima |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Simply extraordinary! Loved it! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ as always, a lovely beautiful poem by you! -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Flowing on the lighter side and so gracefully...I loved this...I think I felt the breeze as I read....right to my heart.**AW Hugs** Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those moments are precious, aren't they? Yep, we can stop 'until' anytime we want to! Beautiful poem, Janet Marie! Denise |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Oh, this is so poignant! I wasn't surprised to find a few tears trailing down my face as I read. The anticipation is wonderful isn't it? Treasure these moments always! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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