Open Poetry #6 |
Love's Quiver Zone |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Love's Quiver Zone Cold and distant I was from you for so very long I did not think we could still sing the same song I thought you were the only builder of grand walls till mine came cascading down like Niagara Falls. It caught me by surprise this passion for you I feel makes me desire to grab every minute I can steal everyday pledging my love thinking you as a friend but now this heart desires only what you can send. I have now what there is to hold till death do us part that one element of love that flutters my sound heart a revelation that comes as the night I shall be alone longing a tender touch that delivers love's quiver zone. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
wonderful. i can very much relate. i loved it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dreamer this is very cool and romantic..James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ You delivered the quiver with class and style. Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Gloria! Very well written! Denise |
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