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Speaking of birds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Speaking of birds I love most creatures that fly in the air. They sail and they glide with abandon and flair. They chirp and sing and flutter in their bath. Their antics are funny, often make me laugh. But nothing is perfect, there is always one, That sneaks up behind, straight out of the sun. And with sure precision he swoops from his bed, Never missing his mark and poops on my head. But I can forgive this statement so strong, For we have polluted his Eden with wrong. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Got me giggling with this one ! I guess paybacks are POOP, huh? Just too cute.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH SY...I just love lookng at things thru your eyes...LOL wear a hat my friend... loved the truth in the last 2 lines... take care, jm |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute poem with a bit of wisdom at the end. Do you then think the bird is 'getting back' at man for polluting his/her world? Something to think about. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Too cute and with wisdom thrown in for good measure ... Loved this read, Sy ... "Shoot for the moon.Even if you miss,you'll land among the stars." _Les Brown_ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you, your right. *L* Janet, Thank you Janet, I'll take your advise. Poet deVine, I do believe. *L* Pepper, Thank you so much, you are the greatest. *L* |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Never had quite that problem but they always seem to know when my car has just been washed for they always give my windshield the Midas touch. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Perfect! LOL Corinne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, A cute little poem with a punching message Excellent! and good for some laughs Love ya Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Septsong, I know what you mean thanks for the read. Corinne, Glad you enjoyed. Elizabeth, Happy you enjoyed the read. Love ya Sy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ this was a great read, I enjoyed it muchly. I could just picture that poop landing on top of your head (hee hee) Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is adorable, Sy! hehehehe....thanks for the laugh!!  Good message in it too!!Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie66, So glad you enjoyed so you agree with the birds? *L* Denise, Happy you enjoyed. *L* |
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