When thoughts come from anger

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Open Poetry #6

When thoughts come from anger

ElektraXOXO
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since 2000-04-07

Posts 30
San Antonio Tx

0 posted 2000-04-07 10:23 PM

A peom written in my lowest of times, many trials was I going through.

So close to death
I seemed to stray
Beneath the ground
Beneath I lay
Cold and lonely
Full of hate
A dreaded torture
Lead my fate
Doors and doors
I seemed to pass
Mirror mirror
The looking glass
The gateway to hell
Will now be open
Now I know
That I am chosen
Pass the pit
Pass the dome
Under the good
Is where I roam
With the evil
Where angels there are none
Deep in hell
Where I come from

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2000-04-08 12:10 PM

Definitely had to be a down time to write this one. You convey that well to the reader.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-04-08 03:27 AM

Elektra~
You sure packed a punch
with your emotions in this.
Well done.
~*Marge*~

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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2000-04-08 03:41 AM

Elektra. I recognize that pit, but when you're down so low, isn't it great how high then you can soar? Your poem expresses well that feeling
Liz

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-04-08 06:35 AM

You express the feeling of being lowest of low very well.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-04-09 12:10 PM

Excellent poem, well written.

Denise

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