Open Poetry #6 |
~The Fairies, Dance~ |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
The Fairies say It's safest to play By candle light And not by day Their shadows dance In the candle light With their wings spread Sparkling bright To catch a fairy Dancing like so At the bottom of the garden Wings aglow Is just pure delight A fantasy come true With wings of gold That are see-through They dance until The morning light Then disappear Until it's night Then out they come To dance once more Upon a dew dropped Dance floor Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I like!! This poem was full of magic and such beauty. thanks so much for sharing! take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~~~~~Very nice poem~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
What a lovely and charming poem. Well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie66, Charming and delightful to read. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Amy~ Thanks, I love writing about fairies for my daughter Amy. She's growing up fast but still loves them. Danny~ Thanks so much for reading it. Martie~ To you also a big thank-you Glad you were charmed. Sy~ Glad that I could charm and delight you my friend Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Very nice to read. I enjoyed your poem very much! "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hmm.. I almost missed this one. Good writing! I liked this one a lot. Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You fairly make the faeries dance ... this is sheer enchantment. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Cassie~ So glad you liked it Mariee~ I love to write about these adorable little creatures. Thanks for your reply Marge~ Thanks for your most colourful and visual reply. It's just fabulous what you do. Thanks to all Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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