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Behold The Love Of A Woman
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Behold The Love Of A Woman |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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She beholds passion within her heart, A power of love woven deep, While minds are awake, Hearts sleep, She beholds a power within her soul, A power of leadership, control Where kingdoms are at war, People cry out for more, She beholds a love deep with compassion, A love of family, friends everlasting, Love of none to compare, Hearts emotions do stir, She beholds herself in beauty and poise, Across lifes' dance throughout the noise, Her grace, her honor, Her loyalty runs through, Devoted and true, She beholds a child, the gift of life, Creator of love through sacrifice, Life to be born and given, Yet dying of herserlf, yet living, She beholds hope, dreams of wonderous delight, Hope of happiness and peace,visions of light, Where love is lifes melody, All creation walks in harmony, She beholds a tune, a song she often sings, About the lover of her heart, The romance of her hearts king, The vision inside her daydreams, What is this tender creature, this delicate beauty, this mysterious, enchanted thing you look upon? Behold the power, the beauty, Behold the love of a woman. "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Romantic this is lovely...I have seen the beauty of a woman...they are the loveliest creatures on this earth. James |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice writing. "a tender creature a delicate beauty mysterous enchanted thing" Makes me want to go out and fall in love. your are definitely "A Romantic Heart" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ You've captured the essence of the true woman of compassionate heart. Very lovingly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful!! Denise |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Indeed, the love of a woman is a wonderful thing. thank you for blessing us with your insights. INclan p.s. I responded to your other poem. See: "Solitary Tear" Sadly, I received no comment from you. [This message has been edited by INclan (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am sorry Inclan...I didn't mean to overlook you...here is a hug  !!!Please forgive me...?Thanks for your replies!James...I am glad you view women so tenderly Thanks for always reading!Danny...Do you have to go out to fall in love?Thanks!for the compliment Marge...thank you for seeing through my poetry! and for the compliment Denise you always make my day!Thank you < !signature--> "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 04-09-2000).] |
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