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Phantom In My Dreams
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Phantom In My Dreams |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Mr. Sandman is knocking upon my door With stardust for these eyes. And off to dream land I go once more To that fantasy land up in the skies. Once again I see him standing there. Fading in and out it seems. Congenial, charming and debonair This phantom in my dreams. Who is this mysterious energy That greets me in my sleep? He calls to me and teases me. The illusion is embedded deep. Remove the mask you hide behind. Let me see who you really are. And then perhaps I just may find The one I admire from afar. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Nice melody flow through this. I really like it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ So good to see you back in here, gal. This is a lovely illusionary piece. I really enjoyed the flow of it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Septsong, thank you. Marge, thanks a lot. It's great to be back. I've been on the road with my job quite a bit but when I returned I started having computer problems and still am. Not sure how long I will be here this time. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
-Eloise... I really liked this piece a lot! Dreams are pretty intense and powerful. They can leave us feeling a wide range of emotions. You have captured that wonderfully here. Hope to see more from you. Take care, AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome back, Eloise! Nice to see you again! This is a beautiful poem! Hope your computer problems are a thing of the past real soon! Denise |
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