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destiny's melody
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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destiny's melody plays within all of us sometimes in a major key, sometimes in minor all we have to do is hear it, and when we do our lives are made all the more finer destiny's melody sings to us in the wind a haunting tune urging us to greater things giving us the strength that we need to go on helping us to find our song and make our souls sing destiny's melody sings to us the music of life it also sing to us the music of love it's voice sings to all of us, loud and clear singing like an angel, sent from above -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
music to our eyes and ears Sven... very nice...and I think I know where your songs of destiny can be heard (smile) no wonder your so inspired...  take care jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sven, well said and well written. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
oh God Sven!! This is one of your best!! So beautiful and truly inspired!! Destiny's Melody, I don't often hear, but with your guiding me, I'll hear those harmonious voices in the wind again.... Simply breathtaking...  < !signature-->There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....excellent words. Nice flow and message. I like it.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . JM, where? Danny, thanks... as always... Isis, I hope so, and I hope it's as beautiful as the one that I hear.. . LW, thank you... ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
I enjoyed this very much! I especially liked the line..."destiny's melody sings to us in the wind a haunting tune urging us to greater things" "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven--love the musical theme in your work! (I'm just a tad partial to singin' and dancin' meself!) Thank you, Mr. Lovely, for adding grace of melody to my mind. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Very pretty, Sven. ~ Claire |
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Destiny Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 47 |
sven... your words always touch me... Destiny |
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