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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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What did you expect from me I'm lying here in agony Crying out to the deep blue sea I'm begging, Lord, just let me be I've submitted to the wounds I bear Shown everyone who didn't care Gave my heart, my soul, my prayer I know this now, life isn't fair You twisted me and broke me in two I shrink away at the thought of you Tell me now, what can I do To begin again, to start off new I cried the most I have in years Overcome by my deepest fears All I can offer now is my tears And wait patiently till the trouble clears You took my soul, you took my core I've never wanted anything more Did you mean what you said before That I will always be your little whore I'm pleading now, let go! let go! If you say you love me so You'd free me from your nasty blow And the bitterness which you bestow So now I make my final plea Can't you just let go of me I'm begging you to set me free You know you must! JUST LET ME BE! [This message has been edited by SorrowsMystress (edited 04-04-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow this is a powerful poem..your pain and bitterness lifts off the page. very well expressed emotions in this. I hope you find healing and strength in your writing. take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. |
JM- my poetry IS my strength. it gives me counsoling when I need it most. It helps me to get my feelings and frustrations out and helps me to realize what I should do. Thank you for your wonderful comment  "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi SorrowsMystress, I wanted you to know that I read your poem, and it is filled with sadness and yet very powerfully writen. I am here to talk if need to. Cerenity |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Excellent verse. Some people just never get enough of you, do they? I can relate well to this one. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can really relate to the last four lines...there is a person in my life who is away from me now but they still have power over me and I want her to leave me alone..when she calls me it stirs up so many emotions...and not good thoughts. James |
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