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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-04-07 04:38 PM


Together

Tina as you stand with Mark to say "I do"
all my hopes and prayers will stand with you.
My heart is filled with joy and happiness
to see my friend so richly blessed.
And as the words are spoken..
"Tina and Mark I now pronounce you man and wife"
two lovers will begin to share a wonderful life.

I share in the joy with both of you
a special day for all your hopes and dreams to come true.
Tina congratulations on your marriage!!!
and as you start your life as one
I hope and pray you and Mark will be the truest friends
and as love and romance blends your hearts so close together
your marriage will surely prosper and endure forever.

Jameslee @ April 7, 2000
Iloveyoumyfriend


© Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-04-07 04:44 PM


sbj...how lovely and perfect...such a love and hope filled wish for your friends...you always put so much of your heart in your poems...I'm sure they will love this and be touched by it...you should frame it and give it as a gift!!!!
takec care, jm

 The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
vertical horizon


Marina
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2 posted 2000-04-07 04:51 PM


James, what a wonderful poem!  I agree with JM...give it as a gift.

Marina

Aimster
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3 posted 2000-04-07 05:35 PM


-James

this was so sweet! you have such a lovely way with words and expressions my friend. and i agree with both janet and marina..defintely give this as a gift at their weddding! Take care!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-04-07 07:44 PM


Thank you Janet, Marina, and Amy.   I have been sharing my poetry with Tina for many moons now and she has been a good encouragement for me to write and she will definately receive a copy of this.   James
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-04-07 08:33 PM


Lovely! I hope you gave them the poem!
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 2000-04-07 08:39 PM


What a sweet expression of your friendship and well wishing, James. Thank you for sharing it here with us.

~ Claire

Denise
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7 posted 2000-04-08 11:35 PM


This is beautiful, James! I'm sure they will both love it!

Denise

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-04-09 01:10 AM


Thank you Poet deVine, Claire and Denise.   I sincerely hope that both of them enjoy this poem.   She has been dating Mark ever since I met her over three years ago and finally they will be married.  I am thrilled.  James
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