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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-04-06 06:33 PM

Iam crying for you,
Iam dying in your arma,
I have yu,
you have me,
As I die in your arms,
Makes me to coming back to you,
What you got is far,,
Beyond compare,
When I die in your arms,
your love comes over me,
I can't describe
how I feel
to bee in your arms,
Hold me,
As I feel cold,
Don't let my heart go from you,
As I lay down in your arms,
Cover with the sweet kisses,
Rock me on and on,
You whisper me softly
in my ears,
I want to close my eyes,
Feel your love one mine,
love me all the night,
slipping into dreams,
I have to make,
I feel your love
surround my soul,
hold me in yoyr arms,
Cover me with the sweet kisses,
rock me on and on,
you're the one I care deeply,
You're the one ,
I came running for your comfort,
I die into your arms,
everytime I fall for you

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2000-04-06 06:36 PM

Wonderful title! And a very passionate poem from you, vandana.
Good work
Liz

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-04-06 08:40 PM

Nicely done Vandana... enjoyed.

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

3 posted 2000-04-06 09:23 PM

This is so beautiful and heartfelt!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-04-06 09:26 PM

Sounds like love to me!

Denise

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 2000-04-06 11:17 PM

Definitely very passionate! Well done, very beautiful!

*Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-04-09 01:16 AM

"Cover me with the sweet kisses..rock me on and on." this is very lovely. James

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2000-04-09 02:08 AM

-vandana

very romantic...passionately sweet. take care!

AMY

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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