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Open Poetry #6

I Still Care, I do!

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

0 posted 2000-04-07 05:32 AM

Overwhelming waves of emotion.
Breaking through the seam.
Often fills me.
Even in my hour of silence.

Memories.
That won't let me be.
It's all coming back.
Taking me on a journey.

Dreams.
That are Realities.
Realities.
That should have been Dreams.
You?
Maybe its all very vain.
Reconciliation, Introspection.
Heart, that won't let go.
Hurt, that cuts deep.
Spending time.
Me and my thoughts.
With you and your dreams.
Sentiments.
They were just ornaments.
Doubts from the very start.
Even the green meadows.
A sight indeed, from a far.
Does it really matter.
Thorns bed them at closer look?

Me?
Sure, I still do care.
But I wish thee well....

christies heart
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 189
NJ, USA

1 posted 2000-04-07 05:44 AM

"Sentiments.
They were just ornaments.
Doubts from the very start."

Very nice..and I can relate. I especially love the above lines.

Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-07 09:22 AM

Dreams.
That are Realities.
Realities.
That should have been Dreams.
You?
Maybe its all very vain.
Reconciliation, Introspection.
Heart, that won't let go.
Hurt, that cuts deep.
Spending time.
Me and my thoughts.
With you and your dreams.
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this poem is so cool!!
Its so rich in your deep thoughts and emotions...very well written out...
and the last lines meaning is perfection!
excellent, I enjoyed this read.
take care, jm

The stars shine so bright, now's the time
I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face,
Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you
And held you close.
Now I will reach for the stars...
Because Oh my love, that's where you are...
Though the storms of black night rage on
I still see your face
I still feel your lips on mine
And though my heart feels all alone without you
I still hear you sing to me
I still hear your voice on the sea...
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