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The Quiet Time
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The Quiet Time |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Quiet Time It’s the quietest of time the resting time for my heart, knowing that so very soon, he and I won’t be apart. It’s the very quiet time giving my heart a rest until I see my love again, knowing he is my best. Shh, quiet, quiet time, allow me to touch base before I see my love again, his kiss my mind does taste. Easy vision on my eyes, loving him in my soul to grow with him daily, still remains a goal. I say “I love you” always; does he hear it with his heart? Does he know deep in his soul we will never part? Perhaps he does, then again, not, but I will take what he’s got and return it tenfold with true love, shh, it’s quiet time, with my love. 5 April, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Anticipation is wonderful, "his kiss my mind does taste", but then the real is always better than anticipated. Your poem well describes that peace of mind and heart knowing you're about to see a loved one Liz |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, Liz! Not deep or profound, but just quiet thoughts until 5:15 p.m.!! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There's a very sad peacefulness about this, my friend..  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, This is very sweet and touching. New love is wonderful. Hope it works out for you!!! Great job!!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - this is so special. (I am whispering you know?). I loved the peace that flows with this poem. The sincerity of love. Simply beautiful Michael |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Sunshine! Very peaceful! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sunshine this is warming all over. Missing him awww, but taking advantage of the quiet time too. Love always to be worked at. Very nice |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ I like your 'Quiet Time' Tick - Tock Hurry on little clock Enough of this His touch I miss Enter now Into my sight Something is So very right ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nan, I like your comment, thank you... Lonewolf, believe it or not, this is a 20 year old love... Michael, your "simply beautiful" simply thrills me... denise, whtdove, thank you for coming in to share your thoughts,... Marge, you always ADD something to my life...thank you. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is in tone, a very loving gentle poem. I found myself slowing down, reading carefullly, my heartrate slowed.....wonderful poem..soothing for me! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sharon, I'm very glad you felt the feel of the poem...thank you for sharing your thoughts on it. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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