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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Open your eyes See the love I have to give Open your arms Hold me close for as long as I live Open your mind Remember that I am yours and you are mine Open your heart Know that I'll love you for all time Open your mouth Tell me you'll love me forever Open your hands We will always walk together Open your spirit Feel the love that I have for you Open your soul Our love is the pallate, full of wonderful hues Open your eyes and see Open your mind and remember Open your arms and hold Open your heart and know Open your mouth and tell Open your spirit and feel Open your hands and walk Open your soul and paint Paint our love, a work of art a work of art is our love art is our love, love is our life love is our life, you are my love --------------------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-07-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, this is beautiful and filled with such language of love...written directly from your heart. ~ Claire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sven, this is fantastic...it could be a song...set to strumming guitars... very beautiful words in this one. take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Well....this certainly opened up something in me! We will discuss THAT later. A very beautiful poem, from a beautiful poet. Marina |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is grand! Just so good!!! Your work lately is so fine!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....Wow....this is absolutely fabulous. Excellent layout and very loving words. I can feel your heart beating through the screen. You are extremely talented my friend.  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . This is kind of new for me, I usually don't do the free form like this, but this is how it turned out. . . All of you, your words mean a lot. . .thank you again. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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